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DRR Book 3, Chapter 65 — Synchronization

🕑 Added 2025-01-18 16:30:24 +0000 UTC

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Joeskine Sabbe

I see all of the chapters as one big whole anyways, but I understand how these last two are intertwined and how as an author you don't feel how to organise them. I don't have a particular preference.

Bigjman666

Holy moly that has got my heart pumping, I get so excited for every new chapter but I gotta say daaaayum that was an amazing read, this whole encounter with the hand has had me on my tip toes, can't wait to read more

James

For me, the way you have split this chapter and the last lends itself to a sense of breathless suspense, that would for sure compel me to turn the next page. Ending the last chapter with Ethan's intentions and opening this next chapter with Guards' observations of the changes within the mental construct, then this quiet quite moving scene with Aris, right before jumping back into the fight with energized esprit de corps... Beat for beat I think it's fantastic.

CM

Thanks for the chapter! I liked it like this, as a separate chapter. It was a special moment between Miktik and her daughter and I think having it just be about them would be perfect. If there was any changes I'd make I'd put everything after "Ahkelios as fades back in" in the next chapter to keep the focus here on Miktik and her daughter and Ethan and guards revelations.

Aaron Myers

Great read, pretty emotional is all the right ways. I agree I think this would work better with the last chapter though

francis perez

Thanks for the chapter

Conviviacr

It does feel like the Aris Aris section would go better with the end of last chapter? Maybe split parts to do the entire interior part up to where Aris goes off as its own chapter? Then have the He Who Guards section with Ethan and the exterior plus a bit from the next chapter?


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