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Just Add Mana 4 — Roommate Etiquette

🕑 Added 2025-06-13 16:20:53 +0000 UTC

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Silver Linings

Dang, thought I fixed that! One moment, I think it's updated in my main manuscript but not here. Edit: Fixed!

Gary Sumners

Hi there! You cited Damien by name three sentences before the "monster under the bed" first used it....

Silver Linings

Whoops, that's a lot of errors! I think most of these came out because of all the content edits. I was meaning to fix them but lost track of this comment and just found it again. >_> Thanks! Getting them fixed now.

Jason Gross

Loving this story! Minor grammar: - in "'This Astral Wing feels off,' he *says*.", "he says" should probably be "he said". - In "*you're* were assigned to the Astral Wing", "you're" should be "you". - "three and half paintings" should be "three and *a* half paintings". - In "the soul that *lead* to the extinction", "lead" should be "led". - Also, should "a lot of the dreadshade" be "a lot of the dreadshades"?

Mr.Turtle

Thanks for the chapter!

BeanerOO

Ugh, utterly dreadful.

Ketharin

Big fan of the name "Dreadshade"

Caz

Yep, dreadshade is better and holds more puntential.


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