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Just Add Mana 30 — A Class Act

🕑 Added 2025-08-12 14:00:18 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! Dang, this was one heck of a day! I love the background and world building you are able to sprinkle throughout the chapters without it feeling like a lore dump. Great introductions to everyone so far, well done!

Silver Linings

Pacing has definitely been one of the bigger challenges of writing this book, haha. I'm still working on figuring it out. Definitely hoping to speed things up from here, although since his immortality is different from most, it's unlikely that we'll be skipping entire years anytime soon. Maybe if I ever write a prequel/sequel to the series! This one will be more focused on exploring his and Utelia's magical development, at least for now.

DeadSlime

Kinda impressed you’ve managed to fit 30 chapters worth of content in just 1 day! Does make me a bit concerned for pacing in the future. Normally immortal characters have chapters spanning years, decades or millennia.

Silver Linings

Excellent questions!

Silver Linings

Thank you! It's absolutely one of my favorite elements to write.

Silver Linings

Imagine how satisfying it'll be when he finds someone worth [Taunt]ing though!

Gavriel

I love the new story, I also like how the mysteries seem to compound, what exactly happened to the dragons in the "short" time Cal was away? How long was he away? Is Utelia out of phase and the dragons aren't truly on the edge of extinction? What happened to the humans? Did Cale happen to the humans? Is Cale more than even he knows? Could that be how he's a true prismatic mage, all of humanity in one being? Why can't Levi notice that he's the only human? Furthermore, why does everyone know he's human, but no one finds that weird? Has Cale ever found anything with more mana than even he has?

Vakothu

I mean I wouldn't even say ex, if anything it feels more like a long distance relationship to me. "You should visit more." "You know I can't."

Kalliope

Everyone's like "Lev is a cute puppy", but I kinda feel old relationship vibes - is she his (Eldritch) Ex? Beautiful talk with clockwork guy. I honestly, however, feel that the cutoff from the very intense discussion to "Welp I gotta help these kids" was too ... abrupt. There was nothing to say, true, but nevertheless, at least a bit of silence and tea drinking should have happened in between. TFTC!

Epeen

Damn that was a wild first day on this realm. Also i think for a chapter that was mostly chatting, its stunning how engaging this was!

BeanerOO

Excellent chapter. Darkness and comedic relief when done well can do a lot to build a deep emotional core to a story, but THIS. Moments like this tie the others together and makes it all greater than the sum of their parts. The darkness and pain give depth and meaning, the comedy eases some of the sharper edges and provides a dimension of relatibility that helps us grow to love characters in new ways. The warmth of passages like this provide contrast for the darkness and the pain and makes space for a message to be injected into the story that keeps it all from becoming overly focused on the pain. It's hard to strike the right note with moments like this, but it MAKES a story what it is and you are doing such a marvelous job.

Michael Larsen

You know, I’m kinda terrified that the reason Humanity is gone is because whoever Cale was before he became CCC, that mage bound ALL the souls of humanity into himself. It would, more or less, explain his massive mana pool, and his massive (but finite) pool of backup souls to use for regeneration. I guess if that’s true, then the only question is: what were the intentions of this mage, for good or ill. Did they do it out of necessity, or simply because they could.

Vakothu

Currently my own theory on Cale is that the human race somehow managed to retcon themselves out of existence, everywhere knows ABOUT humans because humans were present there before the Event that wiped them out of time; past, present, and future. Cale is basically the Abyssal/Monolith of Humanity, and he has so much magic because something about the way Humanity vanished focused the magical potential of every human that has existed or will exist into Cale.

Mr.Turtle

NEW THEORY! Cale could still be Yggdrasil but also/instead one of the Monoliths considering how he described and interacted with The Leviathan. I love that the Leviathan is some unfathomable power and is basically just a really affectionate puppy. My theory about Sternkessel was partially wrong too, it looks like! He was only connected to the Abyssal on a surface level through the mentioned karmic backlash from the Loomweavers! Gods. This story is amazing so far! Regarding the Author's note: I wonder if Akkau has ever thought about renaming himself to Nicol 🤔🤔🤔 Thanks for the chapter!

Michael Larsen

He calls the First Monolith “Lev”! And why do I feel like Cale Cadwell Cobbs is actually the MOST dangerous of all his names? No wonder he doesn’t like people using it.

Michael Larsen

The fact that a Monolith’s first response to Cale is to want to get scritches is possibly the most TERRIFYING thing we’ve learned about his so far!

Apoca

Don't wrap up Day 1 yet! He still didn't use Taunt! Also, I bet the Red Hunters' contingency plans include a ton of those Abyss creatures.


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