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Just Add Mana 32 — Secrets and Sorcery, Pt 1

🕑 Added 2025-08-16 14:00:15 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! I love the Moon sequence, so very on brand showing of Cale's knowledge, and often lack of local knowledge, and then he goes and does something ridiculously powerful without seeming to try. I am very interested in the Collapse, and what actually was, and why Utelia is so different. Could this be a place that could bring some things back to pre-Collapse levels?

Thomas V.

Was the moon bit a Soul Eater joke? It *felt* like a Soul Eater joke…

Youkai-sama

🌕: "Did 'Yggdrasil's End' just tell me to 🛑 😄!? Holy shit! He's gonna cram a Septendecillion mana spell up my iima!" 😱

William Keith

Ah yes, setting up for the inevitable classic moon exorcism arc!

Silver Linings

This was one of the chapters I got pretty stuck on, writer's block wise. I wrote that version of things a couple times, but it just wasn't very interesting (although I can release it as a blooper, lol.) It should be a lot more effective if I touch more on their perspectives over the next few classes rather than cram it all here. I will have to do some edits on previous chapters, because I likely promised "Cale is about to tell the kids who he is" too hard.

Silver Linings

Akkau, staring out at the window, wondering what the fuck Cale just did:

Origo DeDolus

I'm begging to see the interaction between Cale and Akkau regarding the moon's change in expression.

Michael Larsen

Given that CCC’s true nature is the biggest mystery in the series, killing it would bring the series to a crashing halt. What’s interesting is seeing how different characters and even forces of nature react to the MC. Piecing together the truth from the lies is a huge part of the fun, and the concept of “dramatic irony” (where the audience knows more than the characters) has been a staple of storytelling for literally thousands of years.

Silver Linings

I am a Destiny 2 enjoyer!

Gingiberry

[insert gun related moon's haunted meme]

CAPTAINCAEL

i would think Entropy would just be chaos magic

Moon Winchester

I’m annoyed you didn’t give us his backstory or explanation through his mouth. I’m interested in how he explained it to the kids and the kids interpreted it.

Moon Winchester

I think the decay aspect is just Entropy

LUXRUS

Wish you would explain who/what he is in this chapter instead of just giving the bare minimum… really makes it feel like there is no substance to the story—no idea is ever explored

Jack Trowell

Hu ho, a certain professor will be very angry he didn't wait for her before casting hisnide rift artefact spell like he promised

Silver Linings

Fixed, thank you!

Jason Gross

This is great! Typo: "the few from up here was great", "few" -> "view"

Chaotic Monkey

Peak fiction

Apoca

Now they are just letting him run amok...

Rheklr

The sheer density of fun ideas in this story is just so enjoyable to follow. Thank you!

ShyviaAngel

Love it ahah

Michael Larsen

Listen. Either Cale is immensely proud of Flia for calling out the stork lie, or we HAVE to see it at some point.

Michael Larsen

Ugh… You just had to bring up Kill the Moon, didn’t you…


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