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Just Add Mana 35 — A Dragon's Plight, Pt 2

🕑 Added 2025-08-21 14:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Ben Bass

TYFTC! It is good to know that all of the kiddos have higher beings watching over them, even if one of them is just Cale. The draconic vision sounds kinda hilarious so far. I can't wait to see it play out, and how much it leans into the 'damsel in distress' trope!

Zitronenwasser

I have to say, the Next Chapter button is awesome for mobile You don't even know how much time i spend scrolling through chapter Collections on patreon for every chapter LOL

Nim

Verjigorm, Hunter of Great Dragons

V

Can't recall any other story that I've read that went on for basically a full book's length on just one day(or was it two days with the summoning happening on a separate day? Don't recall). Well done, kept engaged and curious the entire time, fun setting.

Silver Linings

Thank you for the kind words! And it's pretty intentional, although I didn't think about it in exactly those terms. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts there! Alternative framings of narrative techniques are really useful when it comes to making certain beats work. I usually think of this as the so-called 'nonsense limit' of the setting. It's a valuable tool in a lot of comedy-based works, e.g. Mashle or Scott Pilgrim, where you establish a baseline for suspension of disbelief. Thinking about it as shifting the comedic relief onto the world is a fantastic way to frame it, though, and especially useful for tweaking jokes that might not work with just the nonsense limit framing alone. DRR's was definitely stretching it at times, haha. Some people mentioned they wanted to see Gheraa's dance battle, but the setting had already had pretty low limit and I couldn't really do more than show reactions without risking suspension of disbelief (and like you said, even then it drifts dangerously close to that edge).

Chaotic Monkey

YESSSS Akkau saw the change :) Sweet

Michael Larsen

Clearly Cale has watched Jurassic Park… 🤣

Michael Larsen

Yeah, Akkau absolutely set out to draw in Cale specifically. Cale is the definition of “break glass case of absolute desperation. Seriously, try EVERYTHING else first. Don’t say you weren’t warned.”

BeanerOO

Magnificent as always xD Definitely enjoying some more lore on Akkau and the dragons. The larger scale story is taking more shape and I'm a fan so far. Also love how Cale thinks about and manages the trappings of fate. Such a fun borderline meta play on fantasy tropes. It's serious to the story, but the absurdity of it matches Cale so damn well. Honestly, using the nature of Cale's character to set the tone of the worldbuilding itself is kinda terrific. You've offloaded the burden of comedic relief from the characters (except Cale himeself, but that coping mechanism is important to his character, so it doesn't detract from his depth) and onto the world itself and I think it's kinda fucking brilliant. If the WORLD is itself a comedic relief character, everybody else has equal access to adding to it themselves without the temptation of any 1 dimensional "comedic relief" characters. In DRR, I found that there were moments where Gherra drifted dangerously close to this edge from time to time. I don't know if this was an intentional solution/adjustment on your part, but it WORKS for me. Nobody is immune from humor and humanizing each and every notably inhuman character (to some extent) feels almost inevitable.

Origo DeDolus

Hahahahaha!!! The moon! AKKAU NOTICED THE MOON!!! THANK YOU!!!! I LOVE IT!! Such a Cale response to whistle away.

Apoca

Dragon kind might not be gone yet but even if no dragon dies after this moment 10 is not enough diversity to keep a species alive. Unless they resort to unsavory practices

Silver Linings

I considered mentioning that! Every day Cale edges closer to having Chuck Norris jokes made about him instead.

Tsula

Lemme guess, any monsters spawned during Cale's nightmares run away in terror long before he wakes?

Spero

Wonder on the possible chance that the lich who married the dragon could possibly get into the main story. Based on what you said about the dragon hunter, maybe the dragon the lich was married to died as well and perhaps at some point the lich may want to drop by Cale and work together as a form of vengeance for the lich spouse (dragon).


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