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Just Add Mana 22 — Ghosts in the Dark, Pt 5

🕑 Added 2025-07-26 14:00:20 +0000 UTC

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Kalliope

Now I want a chapter of Cale in his previous world: he is apparently bound to walking, maybe quickly, he can't perform lots of magic - a lone sane soul on a dim, dark, sacked, empty world full of starving voidcytes and devoid of everything else. Must've been a fun 30 years in the dark doldrums! Shocked he doesn't have whiplash from so much happening the first day he's out from there. And yeah, everyone forgot Ms Whiteleaf, who would by now probably be Ms Whiteleft-through-the-secred-passage, I bet my hearts on it.

Silver Linings

This *does* give me an idea for a potential future thread... Might be many chapters away though. Sternkessel's approach to Magical Geography should still be fun!

Michael Larsen

This is how I understand it: It’s not that he doesn’t have control, it’s that his control has out-scaled most spells long, LONG ago. What’s happening here is that for the first time in nearly forever, he’s ended up on a world who’s power scale is even remotely close to his own. This is all complicated by the face that Cale apparently has been partitioning his life, history, and actions away by embracing the different names he’s been given. Also, he’s limited by how the Magic system works on this reality. His actions give him spells, but to level them up, he has to use them. But he’s so OP that even putting the smallest possible amount of mana into a spell immediately raises it to a never before heard of unique OP’d evolution. At least, that’s how I understand it. I appreciate any corrections. I’m loving the story.

VIMIVI33

An idea for the geography class for him; he just needs to flood the planet or solar system he's in with his mana and kinda get a general feel for each continent and place based on that... Why not he has that mana for it!

aikido 501

I am a little confused at why Cale dose not learn and use more spells, He has clearly shown an interest in learning them in addition to being able to pick them up quickly so his hesitance to do so makes no sense to me. Even if Cale is concerned with possible damages, his barriers and general control over mana would nullify most potential issues like with the light spell. His discussions on teleportation also bring up the idea of him just teleporting to another galaxy or plane of existence to test without risking damage. I might be missing something here it just currently feels that with the capability's currently shown he could quickly become much more capable without needing to rely on others for no reason. (E.g. A high level healing or dispelling/purification fixing the issues in this chapter.) The story had a focus on lack of control making spells too powerful, but does that mean he can't take advantage of those more powerful spells? While there is a good chance I am missing something I feel that I would be nice to get more clarification on this in future chapters.


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