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Just Add Mana — Book 2, Chapter 41 — Academic Revelations

🕑 Added 2025-12-30 15:00:20 +0000 UTC

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BeanerOO

I like this chapter a lot. Great beat change that shifts focus to the students and their plans going forward. I like these and the setup for a tournament arc. That being said, yeah, the placement feels awkward and pulls away a lot from the progression in the Red Symphony. Doesn't seem to tie back into the flow of the main story in my eyes - at least so far. Maybe if there was more of a transition? Some reason for the reader to understand this chapter's relevancy to the Red Symphony?

Defiant

Magical Fun Facts make my day :)

Melissa Harden

Student long term goals! 😁 L, I like the structure not being based on years spent to meet standards but standard and core tenet(s) for each school

Ben Bass

TYFTC! I really do love how empathetic that Damien is, he is the one that will really have a huge impact on Cale, and already has. I think it is going to take all 4 of his apprentices to wrangle him back to Cale.

Apoca

Yeah, but then couple murders happens next to the rivers, it corrupts the magic and suddenly the effects are not so benign. And from that it's a spiral

Chaotic Monkey

The magical fun fact was very sweet, like to see that I can't wait to see what Leo will do at classes

Apoca

"This has caused some rumors to spread about Akkau having a secret assassination squad, which isn't a thing." Because: - it's not a secret - Archmages capable erasing duchies with war spells is not assasination but warfare.

Lurker

Maybe an ocean that has “bread” fish and bread themed creatures?

Lurker

Why do I get the impression there is a magical river or ocean somewhere that was the result of Cale going “oops” my bad moment?


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