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[1% LIFESTEAL] Chapter 26 - Immeasurable Spite

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 08:54:20 +0000 UTC

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Wconn1979

How long is this BS going to drag out?

Mark

I thought it was pretty clear that the Madam had to give up on Freddy in the short term. She tried to move past the Patriarch and collect him but Basilisk blocked her on that, saying he had to be there for his business partners.

ZaA

I'm kinda of confused how last chapter ended with Madam killing off pretty much all of the patriarchs other than Janhalar and then saying she's going into the facility to get Freddy and then this chapter didn't just have freddy rescued pretty quickly? I get that Basilisk was there to get the 60% or whatever it was, but that didn't mean he was against her, and even if she was, she was in like golem form or whatever and sounded like she could pretty easily beat them both, especially with Janhalar being weakened. Doesn't really make sense for this chapter to even happen at all. If it's going to remain as is, you should probably add an.. intermission partway into the chapter on whether or not madam is looking for him at/or explaining her frustration or the situation or what-not, because as is it doesn't really make sense for this to be happening. In my mind, she was about to bust in and save him at the start of the chapter and he'd wake up saved. That being said, I really enjoyed this chapter, the slow buildup of his conviction and him basically winning over them using all these different methods was really exciting to read. Honestly, I think it might be one of the better single chapters I've read in a story (: Anyway, I think even if you address the Madam thing next chapter that it would not be as impactful as if you had placed a short intermission in this one, just because half of the chapter I'm wondering if I missed something last chapter which kinda detracts from it since I'm only partially focusing on what's happening


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