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[1% LIFESTEAL] Chapter 37 - Shark in a Pond

🕑 Added 2023-10-20 09:53:07 +0000 UTC

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Robert Blaise

That's actually a good idea. I'll do that when I edit the book for the final draft

Macronomicon

could you tweak his mental perception of 'his debt'? Dude knows it's not real debt. He knows it's them stealing from him. Every time his internal dialogue refers to it as 'his debt' it feels as though he's tacitly accepted that he owes these people money.

Lotfi Adam

LOOOL. Of course this was gonna happen. But at least the next part will be FUN.


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