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[1% LIFESTEAL] Chapter 39 - The Tiled Plains

🕑 Added 2023-10-27 09:11:40 +0000 UTC

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Robert Blaise

All I'm gonna say is that it will get pretty damn interesting :) Also, Count of Monte Cristo is a big inspiration for the core theme of the novel, as many have guessed already. I do love a classical revenge story, but how that revenge plays out exactly, oh man. That part is where things get fun :)

Matthew Bernardin

Second comment I know but. Have you storyboarded out at least in part how he takes his revenge? Because when I read stories like this something that everyone seems to forget is to do it in a way to quote Edmund Dantes from the Jim Caviezel version of the count of monte Cristo. "They must suffer as I have suffered." A somewhat modern day take on Le Comte de Monte Cristo is the Eddie Murphy and Dan Akroyd film Trading Places where at the end after they have bankrupted the two old brothers they proceed to reveal the reason behind their actions being the bet for a dollar. To be pointed, with people like the Craven Clan, it's not enough to just kill them. True revenge is to take away their wealth, their power, everything that gave them the idea that they could just take from our MC with impunity and rub their faces in the fact your taking it away from them. Then you kill them. That Mr Author is my I guess question/suggestion. Is the story going in this direction/have you thought about just how far the MC will go?

Matthew Bernardin

Gotta love possession :) I think the natives of Feralethal are about to start punching back. Also at first I was mildly sympathetic to Mark for his betrayal. Now, nah now mark needs to get some of the hurting that's coming down the line.


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