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[1% LIFESTEAL BOOK ONE FINALE] Chapter 41 - Revenge

🕑 Added 2023-11-03 08:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Wiggles1

Agree with Chris above- the fact that the leviathan needed to be killed in the netherecho was a surprise. And I was under the impression for the ending fight that he'd suddenly jumped from 1 star (1% lifesteal) to 3 (blood skellies and leviathan).

MavTech

So freaking good! Thank you Mr Blaise! Keep Freddy alive and kicking, biting, cutting and fighting to the top. Bloodshed is the best!

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One bit of feedback: I felt like chapter 41 was rushed: the scene inside the leviathan was epic but it the setup to the conflict with its spirit seemed to come out of the blue. It seemed there should have be some anticipation/dread bridging scene before starting that fight in order to prepare the reader and make it clear that the leviathan had this massive presence in the netherrecho as well as the physical world

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Book one was a real page-turner.


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