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[1% LIFESTEAL] Chapter 150 - Billionaire

🕑 Added 2025-01-09 17:18:47 +0000 UTC

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@Alphamoonman

He never fixed it 😞

Ironfist95

Mistake: Retrated>retreated

Damian

He should check a customer service desk for the refund concept🤣🤣🤣

ZaA

Typing on phone, so sorry for all of the typos/weird autocorrect lmao. Ty for your hard work, again, dude!

ZaA

I understand that, but could be good to sometimes just have him think it rather than write it out. Feel like since you chose to not go with a system, then enforcing that part of the story with him having to estimate the changes vs having EXACT numbers would play into that choice. Like, yeah, it's be on them, and I obviously understand that there's no system, but you're subtracting from the fact that HE is the one taking the measurement by not involving any human thought to it. When you write that he, "writes down his progress" then it at least adds the human element of HIM writing it down. When you "checks his progress" which no mention of them noting it down in his notebook or him actively think "hmm, I was at about 3% total and it's about 30-35% bigger.. damn, 1% that fast?" Or, "looks like about 1% fuller..." Etc. it's kinda like a reincarnation story that doesn't abuse their knowledge from another world or their regret of stagnating and not having gone to college/started working earlier to climb the ranks/not saving money or just any general knowledge you get from having lived 20+ years and having the chance to change that. Its just a missed opportunity from a unique idea, if that makes sense. Obv I love your writing. Been following since your first chapter drop in RR and commenting here, so not saying it's bad at all, just noting that it's something you could consider (:

Robert Blaise

He is indeed a tough one to write without overdoing his personality.

Guy

Also, fun chapters. Freddy seems like a very hard character to write, but it's been great.

Guy

Maybe my understanding of his potential is lacking, but 100 years seems like turbo overkill for 2-star potential unless he stumbles across something mega time consuming (grinding essence manip to optimize his 3-star constructs' reconfig to be on par with essence talent maybe?).

Compendium

Also, once he finalises the nuclear football ability he could get super weird with the upgrading concepts. Seems like it could go a lot of directions

Compendium

Freddy being faster off the mark even with the upgraded abyssal depths shows him and Thor have been getting some results. Not sure how much of it would be his armour

atgongumerki

must be a me problem then

Compendium

Their location would surely have been covered by the initial scouting. Doubt they're properly blind or Freddy wouldn't have been called in

Beeees!

Seems fine to me

Marquess

Would a billion even be enough for that?

Kuraiji

It's good to hear that you're doing better. Take your time we will be patient

Robert Blaise

Hmmm... Doesn't read off to me. Maybe because you didn't register "construct" as remnant?

Kronos

Lmao those sneaky little things

atgongumerki

"On top of that, Dissipate Wave worked wonders for cancelling the ability. He was getting close to being able to upgrade it, and he was eyeing a potential candidate for the first construct—refund. " that little off-comment about dissipate wave, sounds like it does not want to be where it is. Maybe it wanted to be it's own little paragraph? Maybe it wanted to be part of a paragraph that got axed? It's placement even made me think he was gonna use "refund" on dissipate wave first ... but that might be due to my own stupid brain doing stupid-brain-things

atgongumerki

he probably didn't think of the hostages until after he cast his "mini-nuke" After the shock from seeing the devastation settles, he might realise that he didn't know where the hostages were being held ... not that he would have been able to differentiate between the hostage-gore from the opponent-gore if the hostages had been closeby

Gio

He should spend all that money on something ridiculous; like a 5% star. xD

Robert Blaise

Am good. But NGL, I was sick for so long it kinda took the wind out of my sails... Took me 3 days to finish this chapter :/ gonna take a bit to return to my peak form

Robert Blaise

What the hell, I literally caught that and fixed it... 💀 How tf did it sneak back in

Robert Blaise

Also yeah, getting sick fucking sucks. And this sucked particularly bad. Hope you get better soon!

Robert Blaise

This is not a coincidence and it most certainly isn't a mistake. It's a stylistic choice. And frankly if someone makes it to almost the end of book 3 and suddenly gets confused on whether there is a system or not... That's on them chief lmfao

Tryptic

"Would I rather be feared or loved? Easy. Both. I want people to be afraid of how much they love me."

Kuraiji

Thanks for the chapter 😁 How are you doing man ? He let Bloodshed do its thing while he *retreated*

Tryptic

You flicked too hard, dangit!

Kronos

Tftc! “He let Bloodshed do its thing while he retrated back to the previous realm and sat down. “ retrated-> retreated

ZaA

I think that in some cases you should be careful how things are phrased with his progress. "Ten Thousand Wet Hells: Stage 2—3% Progress" makes it seem like there's a system. Even the writing thing is a stretch (realistically it'd be.. quite silly to write all of your info on a piece of paper) but when he "checked his progress" it seems like a system notification, when you could say, " it looks like about 1% progress" or whatever. Knit picking, but worth mention. Other than that, glad you're back. I was also sick and still have a cough over a week after.. not fun. Ty for the hard work

The Golem Crafter

Might wanna edit that in there because if I know Freddy he tends to not think things through love that..... or maybe in your next chapter he might freak out and think the same lol

Robert Blaise

Nope. Hostages weren't on the first floor.

thaughton2

Goddamn

The Golem Crafter

Ummmmm. There were hostages they had to save right? Did Freddy just kill them on accident?

Brett Gragg Jr

Got the hall looking like something out of event horizon

Gio

Thor: You showed off too much!!

Logan

Tftc

Robert Blaise

I am feeling much better. My wife's still got some complications so I've been mad busy getting her to checkups and taking care of her. Nothing serious tho. All good.

Evaldo

Nice chapter ! Are you feeling better dude?

Harami666

First :P


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