Felixfalck
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Character standings round two
🕑 Added 2022-12-04 23:44:00 +0000 UTCPrevious chapter: https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-attire-for-75316069?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_creator&utm_content=join_link
Alice
Progress: 2/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'6
Hair: Short black bobcut
Body type: Fit
Breasts: Generous bust (Double D-cup)
Personality traits: Energetic, Social, Cheerful, Extroverted ---> Lethargic, antisocial, pessimistic, Introverted, gloomy, spiteful
Sexuality: Straight
Gretchen
Progress: 6/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'9
Hair: Long red flowing
Body type: Skinny
Breasts: Medium breasts (C-cup)
Personality traits: Drawn back, relaxed, competitive ---> Commanding, confident, extremely competetive
Eyesight: Bad ---> Perfect 20/20 vision
Sexuality: Straight
Rebecca
Progress: 9/40
Extra perks: 0
Race: Caucasian
Age: 19
Height: 5'2
Hair: Long brown loose
Body type: Fit
Breasts: Ample breasts (D-Cup)
Personality traits: Grounded, Polite, Hard working, Self sufficient, independent, kind
Skin: Pale ---> Tan
Sexuality: Straight
Clothes: School uniform with skirt and jacket ---> Denim mini shorts, Sandals, Red sports bra, Dark blue hoodie
Himari
Progress: 6/40
Extra perks: 2
Race: Asian
Age: 18
Height: 5'0
Hair: Medium black ---> Long pink
Body type: Petite
Breasts: Flat chest (A-Cup)
Personality traits: Innocent, Naive, Kind, Forgiving, Sexually and socially inexperienced
Fetishes: None ---> Corruption and moral degeneration (Unaware)
Sexuality: Straight ---> Bisexual
Libido: High
Comments
Grif end
Actually now that i think about it loathing/loathful might be the right word for it.
Grif end
I think there's a miscommunication here what i mean to say is that "Anger" (A.K.A.:is an intense emotional state involving a strong uncomfortable and non-cooperative response to a perceived provocation, hurt or threat. ) does not feel like what you have described about Alice so far and Irritable or hating seems to fit more to what you have described so far
Felixfalck
Irritable is absolutely a trait I should've considered. I'm reluctant to go and change it in retrospect now though, I'll definitely use it the next time I describe a similar character though! Thank you.
Grif end
Also if i may Suggest changing angry to irritable instead.
Felixfalck
Just ran it through google translate and spiteful didn't mean exactly what I thought it did, you're right. Will correct shortly
Grif end
About Alice, i get the spiteful but isn't angry/anger a different thing ?
