Felixfalck
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Can I call you mommy?
🕑 Added 2022-12-15 00:00:02 +0000 UTCPrevious chapter: https://www.patreon.com/posts/sultry-look-75845762?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copyLink&utm_campaign=postshare_creator&utm_content=join_link
Bitch's piece came to a halt on a green tile.
"Finally, body!" She was over the moon about getting something spicy. The game had already messed with her style, personality and even name. It was a bout damn time she got an upgrade to her body. She didn't even consider for a moment that the game could give her a downgrade as it had done to Alice. Maybe she was cocky, or just excited. Either way she was happy with the color of the tile.
Alice picked up a green card before Bitch got the chance to bark at her.
You have received the cards with great gratitude
This time it's time to match your body with your attitude!
Much taller and with greater seniority you will now be standing
A perfect fit for someone who is increasingly commanding!
Do you continue or chicken out?
Bitch really liked the wording of the card. It had a lot of words she now valuged. Attitude, taller, commanding. It was like a goldmine of potential changes. It was pretty much a nobrainer for her to say..
"I continue!!"
Alice scoffed at Bitch's decisiveness. A trait most often valued, this wasn't the time and place to be reckless. The card burst into flames and Bitch's whole body started morphing. It was much more elaborate than that of Himari. Whilst the Japanese girl had only expanded in certain areas, Bitch was getting something extra..
Once her transformation was complete a couple of things became immediately obvious at a glance. Bitch now stood much taller than before. She was tall, even before the card. At 5'9 she towered over most of her female peers. Now that difference had been exaggerated by a few extra inches as well as her heels. Barefoot she now stood at an impressive 6'1, taller than even most boys. Her heels added even more to that number.
Bitch now looked like the sort of girl one would call mommy. Some twenty years had been added to her clock. It was painfully obvious just looking at her body. Her breasts looked a little fuller, but also sagged what little the straining tube top would allow. Her thighs took the biggest hit though. Perfect for crushing silly little girls (and men) that disobeyed her. The sudden mass increase in her thighs had caused her stockings to burst. Unfortunately she hadn't received a perk to assist with the clothes like Himari did. This left her with no other option that to remove the tattered stockings. Her shorts and tube top were on the borderline as well, but they managed to hang on for now. Still, it looked like the aging woman had made a feeble attempt to fit into the types of clothes her younger self would wear, absolutely disregarding how ill fitting they looked.
Her stomach also seemed to have been given a little pudge, further selling the drastic increase in age. Finally her face looked much more mature, but not any less confidently smug than previously..
"Holy shit! You look like my fucking mom! You're so old!! Ew.. Look at that gut. I hope I age better than you when I get old. LOL" It really was a sight to behold. The spectacle which was Bitch being 20 years older than she was supposed to be, wearing skimpy ill fitting clothes. Not to mention Rebecca who was usually such a refined and well behaved girl talk in such a vulgar, disrespectful and inconsiderate way. Had they seen themselves as they were now the old them would be absolutely mortified.
"If you don't watch that tone I'll be sure to discipline you as if i actually was. So you better watch it!" Bitch was half joking, half serious. She was beginning to feel more powerful, more in control. Any act of rebellion or disrespect would warrant disciplining as she'd already stated. God it felt so good to be in control.
Truth be told, being older felt as though it gave her more authority. It still wasn't free though. She could feel that her body was older, more aged. Her movements weren't as sharp as usual. Every little action took that little bit extra out of her and she imagined exerting herself too much would lead to a terrible sweat and exhaustion, she'd better watch out.
"That's enough about me already! Rebecca, you're up next. Be a good girl and throw the dice, will you?" There was a hint of sarcasm to her voice, as if she was jokingly accepting the role as a maternal symbol to the group. There was however also a hint of belittling, as if she was in fact superior to her friends now.
"Fine, but not because you fucking told me to you old hag" There was no joking tone. A dead serious insult. Rebecca was obviously not coping well with authority. Then again, could it really be called "authority" when she was simply older than them? Even then it'd only be seniority, if one completely left out the fact that it was only her body which was older. Her mind was still very much 19. A very cocky overconfident controlling 19 year old..
Rebecca rolled the die. She only needed a 2 to retain the lead over Bitch.
Comments
AS
Being constantly buzzed or drunk would also be a nice impediment to her clarity and intelligence. It would be nice to have Bitch's cunning and ruthlessness be undercut by her sloppiness
Felixfalck
Makeup and crow's lines are definitely thing's I would've added if it wasn't impossible to make with the AI. Getting makeup is hard enough as it is, but to get it looking the same-ish over several images whilst also changing other things is as it stands, impossible. The smoking and alcohol is absolutely something I have in my mental notepad for possible mental alterations later down the line, if it comes to it. I might even make er slightly pudgier to really sell that "unhealthy lifestyle" mentality. If she gets perks that allow it, of course. Don't want to be breaking my own rules.
AS
If you wanted something to bring her down a peg physically, I could see crow's lines or heavy makeup to make her look even more mature. Or maybe making hera smoker or alcoholic to play into her fatigue
AS
I think Bitch has the perfect amount of pudge for her "mommy" aesthetic. It's realistic while still very hot. Loosing her best twenty years is definitely plenty of punishment.
Felixfalck
You're right. I should dedicate some time to that. I'll add more emphasis on that going forward. Thank you for the input!
Grif end
It's not a matter of changing her impression but giving her some sort of straggle internal or otherwise or as you put it: "I want there to be some sort of understanding of what she's lost.."
Felixfalck
How the players perceive the changes changes depending on their mental changes. Bitch's new name doesn't hinder her chances at winning the game at all. This is pretty much all that matters to her at this point, getting what she wants. In addition, she can't remember her old name, so it feels as though Bitch has been her name forever. She knows it's wrong but the lack of a "right" makes it almost normal in a sense. From any other perspective her changes have been rather unkind. But if you want more of an internal struggle, I get that. I'll try to work on it for my next story, it's a bit late now to alter her impression of things at this point. Hehe
Grif end
Ok so we don't actually know how much she rolled, good to know.
Grif end
That's why i said "seemingly" also don't feel pressured to add anything i am just pointing out that from Bitch's perspective the game has been good to her so far the only bad thing she got was from cheating and for something ment to be punishment it wasn't all that bad as she admits herself.
Felixfalck
I don't know if I'd consider it "good" to lose out on 20 years of your life. Perhaps I'll send some weight gain or something her way if I get the chance.. :P
Felixfalck
That's how much she'd need to stay ahead
Grif end
On a different note i wanna complain about Bitch getting an other (seemingly) good transformation but i can't be mad at that picture...good job.
Grif end
Just a clarification did Rebecca actually roll 2 or are you just stating how much she would need to roll to pass Bitch ?
