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Epilogue: Alice

🕑 Added 2023-06-09 03:05:54 +0000 UTC

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Felixfalck

If you've got elaborate feedback I'd LOVE to hear from you in my DMs!

Carthoris

Varying timeframes, that is a nice way of doing it. I was expecting a brief but complete telling of their new lives (or at least just the juicy bits) but how you've done it is much better. Also another very cute Alice pic. As far as overall story feedback, I certainly have some, as I'm someone who super over analysis everything I read/watch and I hate to sound negative all the time but if you want to hear it I'll throw my thoughts at you.


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