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How To Train Your Doggy - Part 1 - Mind Control Story

🕑 Added 2018-05-30 00:19:44 +0000 UTC

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Spark

Revenge is. Well. You'll have to wait and see.

This was good but I feel sad for melissa. I hope she gets revenge

Spark

We might learn more about Melissa as time goes on! I haven't decided yet. I just knew we needed to learn more about Megan if this was going to have anything close to a decent ending.

JZZY

Welp this is bizarre. I’m really not into the human animal hybrid. I love the sci fi dystopian feel coming from the world this is set in. Megan is delightfully cruel, just treating Megan’s situation as a way to entertain her viewers. I love the way she narrates Melissa’s situation to her phone as though Megan isn’t even there. The way Megan slowly takes more and more of her human features away her ability to talk, walk or think. It all adds to a very vindictive character, I do like learning that shes afraid of her mother and that all this cruel humiliation is done for… two follows. I just wished we leanred more about Melissa before she went into debt. The way it was written like a Vlog was very entertaining. It kept a fast pace from beginning to end with plenty of events happening to Melissa that it was easy to get into.


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