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Dark Story Suggestions?

🕑 Added 2021-12-20 04:34:02 +0000 UTC

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mutatiio

I enjoy dark tales myself as long as they aren't death or gore.

Spark

I might have to check out that Patreon, come the first. Did you have any particular story concepts within the genre you'd like to see me write?

Chode

I really like super hero(ine) stories, from the perspective of the hero, where the villain wins. If you’re into mind control stories, I follow a writer here on Patreon by the name of Madam Kistulot who is a master of that exact genre.

Sylent-M

Rrgh, editing.

Sylent-M

Had another idea from the mention of intelligence loss, albeit in the opposite direction. MC starts as a dumb, sexist, jock. One day the captain of the debate team catches him bullying her junior members. As the latest in a long line of witches, she casts a spell on him to change his behavior. Over the rest of the school day he finds himself shifting from his tall, burly self to a small, dorky looking girl. Not ugly, but not conventionally attractive. She also gets an increase in intelligence. As, despite her fear over what’s happening, she finds subjects she used to struggle with growing easier and easier. The spell does contain a reality altering component, meaning that no one notices the change other than her and the caster. Her friends all see her as one of them, her parents think she’s always been that way. The only other major change is that her wardrobe is adjusted to fit the new her. Unable to draw anyone’s attention to what’s occurred, she tries to continue as normal. Only to find it practically impossible. The sports she enjoyed are beyond her current physicality (maybe she’s asthmatic, adding further difficulty). The FPSs she played are no longer stimulating. Her friends are morons who can’t keep up with her, and their denigrating remarks towards people she now resembles hurt even though they’re not directed at her. After several increasingly miserable days trying to reclaim her old life, she storms off from her old friends after a particularly awful comment. Weepily wandering the halls, she encounters the debate captain. She invites her to the clubroom, and - after apologizing to the members she bullied before all this started - finds herself enjoying the discussions and back-and-forths. The story ends with her being bullied in a manner similar to what she did at the start, only for the captain to swoop to her defense, the two now dating.

Spark

This seems to have been cut off, part way through? Was there more to the idea?

Sylent-M

Man lost in the woods/out on a hunting trip/documenting an unexplored wilderness, encounters a cave to take shelter in for the night. He enters, only to find it inhabited by an apparently pregnant naga. She swiftly bites him, her venom being a heavy aphrodisiac and mutagenic that leaves him in a lust fueled haze as he shifts into a woman. The newly turned woman finds out first hand that nagas do not carry their clutches themselves, as the naga transfers her eggs via ovipositor. She then acts as a living incubator, kept pliant by repeated injections. Bad end would be the young hatch inside her and claw their way out, killing her. Pseudo-good end would see her suffering a combination of Stockholm syndrome, and addiction to the aphrodisiac and sensations of being full of eggs, leading her to remain in the naga’s clutches to bear further broods.


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