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Demon Queened - Chapter 50 - With Nowhere to Go

🕑 Added 2024-10-03 01:29:10 +0000 UTC

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Striving Spark

No worries - I'm happy that I can inspire that sort of passion in my readers. <3

Juan Diaz

Ah thanks, that makes sense. I do think that Devilla firing Alira was justified, even if unknowingly and done in a tantrum. Even if the rest of her family was blameless, Alira has no one but herself to blame for their removal from power. It was she who manipulated her into firing her rival and ultimately completely ruined the queen's friendship with her childhood friend, so it's no surprise that Devilla lashed out. That Alira holds a grudge against her even after almost 15 years goes to show just how scummy and shameless she is. Honestly, the way Devilla has been treated by the families since her childhood makes no logical sense. Never mind her being the royal heir, she's literally the only defense they have that can stop the hero from completely exterminating what remains of their race. So making her into an antagonistic and contrarian person and treating her like shit over and over even till the present day is really dumb. Even though she didn't leave in Tower Conquest, had they never considered that one day she might have had enough and just left the tower? But well... how unreasonable it all is is a moot point considering that from the very beginning Devilla was viewed not as a person, queen, or protector, but as a puppet for the families to take advantage of. It truly makes my blood boil lol. Anyways, thanks for the chapter and sorry for the rant. I'm just invested in the story as you can see, so I'm looking forward to what comes next!

Striving Spark

In theory? Yes. I mean, Alira generally acts through proxies and it would be a bit difficult to prove anything, but Devilla could always just make use of her authority and force the issue. The main reason she never did previously is that firing Alira - and removing her family from power - exploded in her face so badly that it left her a bit traumatized. To call it an unpopular decision among the other families would be an understatement. These days, it's more her personality - her feeling like she deserves it, and her not wanting to put anyone in prison purely on her say so. Honestly the only reason she's willing to take steps is that she knows she needs to earn some actual trust and faith within the tower to pull her plans off...

Juan Diaz

Can’t Devilla just order Alira to stop defaming her? I mean, she’d be perfectly justified to throw Alira in the dungeon already, ‘cause tarnishing the reputation of the queen to the public is in no way acceptable. And, it’s not like any of the other families are going to take Alira’s side, since her slandering is being done out of sheer pettiness.

Sturstryk

If you're looking for suggestions, perhaps have either Lucy or Bailey make mention of it. Lucy was already aware that Abby has feelings for her, and would have seen her behavior first hand. Bailey might be able to figure out her lack of interaction with the succubus perhaps from the lack of her scent on Devilla ... and how that's probably a problem. But yeah, I think Abby is long overdue a date and a proper meal *wink wink* with Devilla, and I trust you'll figure out a way to make that happen. Also, it blowing up in Devilla's face a bit before it gets resolved is fine too, just so long as it leads to growth in the end.

Striving Spark

2. Yeah, I've been trying to figure out a way to resolve that... There's a non-zero percent chance of that exploding in Devilla's face before she even realizes there's a problem. Hopefully it can still be resolved with a conversation and maybe a little attention, regardless.

Striving Spark

1. Alira is the head of Mellany's family. Her grandma, who's been working to ruin Devilla's reputation since she was a kid.

Sturstryk

2. Will Abigail be getting any "intimate" time -- sexy, romantic, or otherwise -- with Devilla soon? I know Devilla's been spending a lot of time with Lucy, and for good reason. I just feel like Abigail needs some time and attention too, and her reactions have been hinting at a growing insecurity with where she fits in Devilla's life now. And, unfortunately with how dense and self-depricating Devilla is, I'm not sure if she's going to realize how much her first friend since the botched ritual probably needs her right now.

Sturstryk

1. Have we been introduced to Alira yet? I'm wracking my brain and it feels like that's a name that I should be familiar with, but I just can't seem to remember who that might be.

Sturstryk

Great chapter! Devilla and Lucy continue to be adorable, and the intrigue continues to grow! I do have two questions, though:


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