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Demon Queened - Chapter 44 (Rough Draft)
🕑 Added 2024-08-01 07:14:34 +0000 UTC(No, you're not imagining things. I wrote another chapter... took me about 2 hours, all told? I just couldn't stop.)
Devilla
“Lucy…” I whispered, my voice faint enough that I’m not sure even Bailey heard it, let alone Feyra who was laying a few feet from me. My eyes were locked upon the statue that had once been a living, breathing redhead. A statue with a smile on her face, and a thank you on her lips - though what she was thanking me for, I couldn’t fathom. For failing to protect her? For daring to give thought to hiding my abilities when people were in real danger? What had I possibly done that might have deserved thanks?
A cough from the side drew my attention towards the prone figure of Feyra, and gave me my answer, no matter how little I wished to accept it. She’d been thanking me for saving her friend. For defeating the cockatrice that had threatened her. For doing what she would not be able to… because even as she turned to stone, she’d thought of others before herself.
“Wha…” Feyra started, then stopped, staring wide eyed at the petrified Heroine besides her. “What did you do?”
“I hesitated,” I told her, my voice flat. Cold. “Something I won’t do again.”
Feyra shuddered when I spoke, though whether at my inflection or my words I did not know. Nor did I care. All that mattered to me was the splattered corpse that now decorated the wall. The corpse of the cockatrice that had turned Lucy to stone. That I had allowed to reach Lucy, through my hesitancy. If it could petrify her, though, then surely it could depetrify as well.
At least, that’s what I told myself as I scraped a feather off the wall and popped it into my mouth, washing it down with a bit of water stolen from the air. Yet even as the genetic material of the monster passed into my gullet, I felt… nothing.
No. Not nothing. There was something - an imprint, similar to what I had with Bailey, but… weak. So much weaker than it should have been. Was it the difference between monster girls and monsters? No. Impossible. If that was the case, then nobody would ever be able to get anything out of plants, which was the weakest of the three.
Though, speaking of plants… Yes. I recalled something, from Amessa’s impromptu lecture upon potion making. That there were certain parts of the plants that were stronger. That contained more magical power. That could be used better. I wasn’t sure if monsters worked the same, but… it was hope.
“Feyra.”
“What?” the green hair girl all but snarled at me, her face twisted by rage as she tore her eyes from Lucy to glare at me. “You want to kill me, now that you’ve taken the Heroine out of the picture? For good, maybe, considering she’s not even dead, just-”
“I need you to use your powers,” I interrupted. I had no time to listen to her tirade. As much as I might have deserved her anger - albeit not for the reasons she’d claim - I had no way of knowing what was going through Lucy’s mind right now. Whether she was awake, in there, screaming to move but unable to do so. Whether she was in pain, and suffering. Maybe she was merely asleep. Something to ask her when she was back. “I need you to find the parts of the monster that have the most magic.”
“Why?” Feyra demanded. “So that you can destroy them? Make sure she’ll never come back?”
“If I wanted to ensure she’d never come back, I would break her. I want to bring her back, but the damn chicken feather isn’t doing me any good.” Whether because monsters concentrated their magic more than monster girls, or because of the researcher’s meddling with monsters, I had no way of knowing. Hopefully the former - if it was the latter, there was a chance they’d managed to breed something worthless for potions without even knowing.
“Like I’m going to believe that!” Feyra scoffed. “Even if you do want to bring her back, it’s probably just to fuck with her some more, right? Break her heart, then turn her to stone again? Bet you have another of those stupid chicken monsters just waiting somewhere!”
“If that was my goal, then why did I kill the last one?” I queried her, before holding up a hand. “No. Stop. I don’t want to hear any more of your twisted logic. We both know you can twist anything I say to make me the baddie. To make me the one at fault. Maybe you’re even right to do so. It was my hesitation that cost her. My desire to keep my secret safe that allowed all this to happen. My idiocy that put us in this position. Yet that won’t stop me from bringing her back. So you can either point out which monster part I need to consume, or you can sit there and entertain yourself while I consume every damn bit of this bird until something changes.”
Feyra didn’t respond, at first. She just stared at me, eyes wide, like she’d never seen me before. It wasn’t until Bailey growled in her general direction that she finally replied. “You need to drop your magic first. Otherwise I’ll go blind trying to find it.”
“...Right. Of course…” I’d honestly forgotten I was holding it. It certainly hadn’t done me any good, when it mattered most. Great for holding back annoyances, and yet when a true threat came along… I sighed, shaking my head and allowing my power to disperse. “Done.”
Feyra nodded, and as I watched her eyes began to shift, the pupils elongating like a cat’s as she eyed the room around us. Eventually, she pointed to two distinct parts in the wall - one that looked vaguely like a snake’s head, and another that looked like some sort of… goop. Studying it closely, I thought there was a chance that it was one of the creature’s eyes. “There and there. Those are the two places I’m getting the strongest reaction from.”
I hesitated a moment, between them, before settling on the eye. It was the least tasteful of the two, but if the snake’s poison was what petrified than perhaps the chicken’s eyes were the key to removing the curse. Another bit of water was pulled from the moisture in the air, encapsulating the goop and freezing around it to form a perfectly smooth pill.
“Thank you,” I said, popping it into my mouth and swallowing it quickly.
“Not like you gave me much choice,” Feyra muttered, crossing her arms. “I’m surprised you didn’t outright threaten me, though.”
“As if I would have been able to face Lucy, if I had,” I replied, eyeing her stone form. “...I’m going to tell her everything, after this.”
“What?” Feyra asked, blinking at me in surprise. Even Bailey looked shocked - or as shocked as she could manage in her lupine form, at least.
“I’m going to tell her everything,” I repeated. “Who I am. What I want. What I can do. Trying to keep my secrets almost got her killed today. I won’t… won’t let that happen again.”
“You… actually mean that, don’t you?” Feyra whispered. I could hear the incredulity in her voice. “You’re actually worried about her.”
“Of course I am,” I replied, reaching out to touch the Heroine’s stone cheek. Her skin was cold to the touch. I tried my best not to draw comparisons between her statued state and a corpse. “I… don’t know if I can claim to love her. I don’t think I’m deserving of such a thing, in any case. But I do care about her, quite a bit. Maybe… almost more than anything.” The only one who could come close would perhaps be Abigail, who’d been with me since the start of all this.
Closing my eyes, I looked again for that which did not belong inside me - for the imprint of powers that were mine to borrow, if not own. This time I found them. Three, in fact - though two of them were much dimmer than the last, like… distant stars, compared to the ever present sun. All the same potential, all the same power, but much harder to access in a meaningful way. Not that it mattered to me much. Not when the power I could most easily access was one of softening - one of restoration, from flesh to stone.
I opened my eyes again, aware of a faint glow building behind my irises. Instinctively, I knew that I could focus my gaze on a particular part of Lucy - that I could choose to bring back only part of her. The better to consume her, I assumed, considering the creature that had held this power.
Of course, I was far greedier than a chicken. I wanted all of her - and all of her I would have. Already, I could see the coloration returning to her flesh, the pink of her skin and even the red and gold of her armor as flesh, bone and metal was all restored to its proper state. A deep breath filled her lungs, her smile widened even further, and at last the words I’d read upon her lips spilled out audibly for me to hear-
“Thank you! I knew you could turn me back!”
“Well, that makes one of us.” Though my words came out a grumble, my lips were spread into a smile as I stood before Lucy. A smile at seeing her restored. Knowing she would be okay.
Now I could only hope she’d be okay with me.
“Lucy,” I whispered. “There’s something I need… no. Want to tell you.” I took a deep breath, closing my eyes for another moment to prepare myself, before forcing them open so that I could look Lucy in hers. She deserved my full attention. “I-”
“Lucy already knows the Demon Queen killed her mom!” Feyra blurted out, freezing me in my tracks.
“What…?” I asked, my voice a hoarse whisper. She knew I did what?
“Feyra!” Lucy exclaimed, a frown upon her lips, before she turned to me. “Don’t worry, Eena. I already know you’re a high ranking demon, but I’m sure you didn’t have anything to do with that!” She paused, her smile suddenly fragile as she tentatively asked. “You… Didn’t, did you?”
“I… No… of course not…” My voice was stiff. Unconvincing, even to my own ears, and yet the look of relief on Lucy’s face spoke volumes. She believed me. She believed me because she said it, and she knew I would not lie. And I hadn’t lied. I really had nothing to do with her Mother’s death. I… had she even told me her mother was dead, before this point?
No. That wasn’t the point. At least, not the point I needed to be focused on. The important bit was… “What do you mean you know I’m a high ranking demon?”
“Well, there’s lots of signs,” Lucy replied. “Like, you wanting to know about holy magic could only be for the sake of the Demon Queen testing it or something, right? And you’re obviously getting food from a demon encampment, somewhere, too! And it would explain why you keep talking about a dark history - she probably gave all sorts of terrible orders, didn’t she? But you’re trying to make up for it now!”
“I… That’s…” Not untrue. I could say that. I could tell her that she was missing details, and leave it at that. I could let things continue as they had been. Let her believe that I was just a high ranking demon. Not forever, of course. Just until I got to the bottom of this whole ‘who killed her Mother and blamed me’ business.
It was so tempting to do just that. To let things lie.
Yet how could I lie in the same bed as her, knowing she thought I’d killed her mother? How could I face her, knowing that she was only okay with me because she had a misconception about who - if not what - I was?
If I didn’t tell her now, then when would I?
“Lucy,” I whispered, forcing myself to look her in the eyes. “The Demon Queen didn’t kill your mother.”
“What…? What do you mean?” Lucy asked. “She was killed by a demon assassin!”
“A demon? Perhaps,” I admitted, as much as I didn't want to. “The Demon Queen doesn’t have total reign over them, so I can’t rule that out. Especially when these… people succeeded in home brewing their own monster girls. Bailey’s proof enough of that.” Lucy’s eyes widened at the revelation, but I didn’t stop talking. I couldn’t talk. “The truth is, I don’t know enough to say what really happened to your mother. I don’t know who killed her, or why. But I can tell you here and now that it wasn’t the Demon Queen.”
“How do you know?” Lucy asked, obviously bewildered.
I managed a weak smile. “Because I’m her.”
A beat of silence followed, as Lucy stared at me, eyes wide. I was distantly aware of Feyra groaning, and putting a hand on her face. Of Bailey’s head swiveling between the two of us. My focus was only on Lucy, though. On Lucy’s eyes, as they stared into mine. I took a step towards her -
Her hand went towards her sword.
***
Lucy
The moment my fingers went towards my blade, I knew I’d made a mistake. I mean, yes, Eena had just told me she was the Demon Queen… the embodiment of all sin I was born to fight. The one I’d always believed to be my mother’s killer. The ultimate force of evil in this world!
She was also still Eena. Still the girl who kept doing good, despite refusing to believe that she could be good. Who’d paid Feyra three saints just to show her around town, so that the green haired girl could get out of debt. Who’d helped a town just for potatoes - though maybe that one wasn’t entirely selfless, since she really did seem to love potatoes? But still! She was Eena. The girl who fed foxes, and said ambiguously ominous lines without realizing it! Who needed to be hugged and convinced she was a good girl, because she could never believe it. The girl I was falling for.
What really drove it home, though, were the tears. Those, and the look of self-hatred and rejection in her eyes when my hand touched the blade. The blade which… was sort of taken from her, if the church was to be believed? Except that didn’t make sense. Eena was around my age! Or at least she seemed to be? I mean, the church said she was basically just reborn continuously every time the Demon Queen died, but she’d talked about having a childhood friend, and she’d mentioned her mother, and…
…Oh. The sword… was her mother’s? I was threatening her with her mother’s sword?
“I’m sorry Eena!” I cried out, snatching my hand away from the blade. “I shouldn’t have reached for my… for the sword like that. I was scared, but that’s not a good excuse! I mean, you could have hurt me any time if you really wanted to… But you never did. Because you never wanted to! Because you’re trying to do better, right? Even if… even if you have done a lot of terrible things…”
What sort of terrible things, though? Was it really on the level that the church taught? If she wasn’t really reborn again and again, that would mean it was her mom, and her mom’s mom, and her mom’s mom’s mom, and so on that did all those things I was thinking about. I mean, there hadn’t even really been any fighting between humans and demons for as long as I’d been alive, what with all the demons living in a tower within the wastelands…
Also, was it just me, or was Eena kind of silent? Or… no. Not silent. Just sort of muttering to herself? Muttering some really concerning things!
“Of course it ended up like this,” she muttered. “Of course it did. How else could it have ended? There’s no way you’d believe me. Not when I’d spent so long telling you how terrible I am. Not when you know how terrible I am. Because you do know, even if it’s for the wrong reasons… even if the church’s stories are wrong, for example, it doesn’t change the fact that I messed up. The fact that I let you be hurt. The fact that I kept you in the dark… slept with you, all while you thought I was your mother’s killer…”
“Um… Eena?”
“I should go,” she said, looking up at me. “I should… I should give you some alone time. Or… I can stick around long enough to keep the monsters off you, if you’d like, and then go? Or maybe I should just have you wait an hour or two while I kill everything dangerous in the woods, so that nothing can harm you, and then you can leave without me.”
Okay, that last bit was really concerning! More importantly, though… “I don’t want you to go!”
She blinked. “Why not? I’m… I…”
“Because you’re my friend, who I like a whole lot! And maybe am falling for more than a bit? Though some part of me worries we might need to take a break from sleeping together for a little while, until I sort some things out… like. Are you really the embodiment of sin? And do you… have tentacles I don’t know about? Or was that just a rumor?”
“...No, I do not have tentacles,” Eena said. “Of course I don’t have tentacles. What is with humans and thinking I have tentacles? And I’m not the embodiment of sin, either! I’m just a twenty-one year old girl. Born to a mother who loved me, just like you. Except mine was taken at birth, by…” She trailed off, looking away from me, but I already knew what she was going to say.
Her mom was taken away by the Heroine before me.
“Eena-”
“My name is Devilla. Not Eena. Devilla Satanne. Demon Queen extraordinaire. Your sworn enemy, according to the church - and yet, I thought that I could somehow change that… That I could make you a friend. An ally. That we could bring peace between us…”
“We can!” I protested. “I mean, I think we can? We can try, anyway! I actually really love that idea!”
“..,But you think I killed your mother,” she whispered, seeming confused. “You… you reached for your sword…”
“I got scared! And I’m really sorry for it, but… I was always told the Demon Queen was evil! But you’re not evil!”
“How can you be so sure?” Eena - Devilla? - demanded. “How do you know I’m not just… fucking with you, as Feyra put it? Playing with your heart?’
“Because you wouldn’t have said it, if you were!” I declared. “And because Feyra’s kinda been mumbling ‘just kiss her already’ for a bit, now. I think we maybe broke her?”
“K-kiss!?” Devilla demanded. Her cheeks turned bright red. “That’s… I mean… it’s a bit early in our… I mean, we’re not even officially dating yet, so…”
“See?” I grinned. “There’s no way you’re evil! Even if you are the Demon Queen. Evil wouldn’t blush so cutely!”
“I’m… pretty sure that’s… I mean…” Devilla blushed even more. “Why do you always call me cute?”
“Because you are?” I grinned, stepping forward to wrap my arms around her. “Very cute. My really, really cute… Friend? Or, well, noot a girlfriend, but…”
“I mean… I… Guess I could be your… I mean, if you wanted me, even now that you… know, then…”
Less than a minute ago, I’d been thinking we might need a break to sort things out. But now… “...My girlfriend is so cute when she’s blushing!”
There was no response from Devilla. Instead, it was Feyra who muttered, “I think you might just become the first Heroine to kill a Demon Queen through blushes.”
I wanted to disagree… but… maybe it was best to lay off for a little? Just until Devilla came back to her senses!
~~~
Author's Notes:
So is the reveal everything you thought it would be? Did you freak when Lucy reached for her blade? Did you believe in them to the end? I really want to hear people's thoughts!
As for me? I had no freaking clue how this was going to go! I mean, I knew the broad strokes. I figured out a while back that Lucy would reach for her sword, and then snap out of it when she realized what a mistake she'd made - similar to how Devilla briefly thought about how she could defeat Lucy when they first met, then snapped out of it when she realized what a horrible thought that was. But beyond that? I wasn't entirely sure how the conversation was going to go.
I sure as hell didn't expect it to end on girlfriends, though, I can tell you that! I'm gonna have to run it by my beta reader and proof reader to see if I'm just out of my mind - I did write this in two hours, between 10 and midnight, so there's a chance I'll be thinking more clearly tomorrow and want to remove that bit. But... we'll see... Lucy did say she wanted Devilla to think about dating her once everything had come out...
Comments
Sturstryk
As for Feyra's turn-around, I don't think it's too sudden either. I think she'd already subconsciously accepted Devilla's feelings for Lucy, partly because if her grousing about how lovey-dovey they were in a way that, to me, read like she was more concerned about getting second-hand diabetes than an actual concern of trickery from Devilla. She just needed to intellectually accept that Devilla wasn't a threat, and what just happened was, I think, enough to punch through the cognitive dissonance at least a little. Of course it'll probably take a while to fully convince her or a lot of things (deprogramming someone from cognitive dissonance is a lot harder than most think). But we at least know that, deep down, she already ships Devilla and Lucy, so her muttering about how they should just shut up and kiss already sounds pretty in character to me.
Sturstryk
Was the decission to become girlfriends too sudden? I don't think so, no. This was a moment of extreme emotions, and while Lucy's initial reaction to Devilla's reveal was negative, I think it makes sense for her character that her kindness and selflessness overwhelmingly won out. Also, people tend to make drastic, often rash, decisions in incredibly emotional moments. So, while Lucy -- or, more likely, Devilla -- might second guess whether becoming official girlfriends might have been premature or a mistake once things calm down and they've had time to think, it happenning now makes lots of sense.
Luminarylumenwood
It wasn't too sudden imo, I really loved her trying to stop Devilla from spilling the beans by giving her important information that could have complicated the whole thing so much. Instead it turned out perfectly 👌. My girls are together ❤️
Striving Spark
Hah! Glad to hear you enjoyed so much! And I'm glad you liked Feyra's change of heart - part of me worried it was too sudden, but after seeing how desperate Devilla was to restore Lucy and her honest willingness to just spill the beans... Well, she can't explain all of Devilla's good deeds and qualities away forever, now can she?
Luminarylumenwood
Thank you thank you thank you, finally!!!! I am beyond happy and had to try really hard not to squeel while sitting in the break room at work, because I could not explain this to my colleagues. I am also delighted to see Feyra finally come around!!! I keep wanting to call her Freya...
Fee for all
OH MY GOD YES
Striving Spark
Awwww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!
DreadWulf221
That was amazing, this story has been one of my all time favorites from the beginning but it just keeps getting better and better! Easy 100/10 👍👍
