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Poll: The Oliver Conundrum
🕑 Added 2025-09-17 10:09:57 +0000 UTCHello everyone! Today, a poll about Oliver and the potential Dom bull!
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When Oliver got introduced in Chapter 21, I imagined him as "the" Dom bull. Just like Nathan, I was planning to have him be a mainstay in the game, offering some variety, and an interesting dynamic.
Sadly, Oliver proved divisive, for the very simple reason that I didn't write him properly enough. He wasn't a good, respectful Dom to Laura, and was humiliating toward you. It made a lot of people absolutely hate him, and that pushed me to make him optional.
After that, my plans were to simply put him under the rug, have him get a girlfriend, and remove him from the story. He would have been replaced by another Dom bull, written properly (at least, I hope) from the onset.
But a lot of people have been asking for Oliver to come back. The issue is that I can't simply bring him back in the current situation, because a lot of people that would enjoy a Dom bull might have removed him from the story.
So, I'm left with three options, from which you'll be able to choose:
1 - I go back and improve Oliver from Chapter 21. I make him into a proper, respectful Dom bull, that may overstep sometimes (because he's not 100% used to it), but will fill his role properly. That would require a bit of work for it to be done properly, but would make the end result be the most cohesive.
2 - I don't touch the past Oliver. Instead, I bring him back "improved" (he has read about good practices, and is ready to be better), with the option for people who removed him to have him back. It's an interesting story, but it might feel a bit disjointed.
3 - As I planned initially, I simply remove Oliver, and replace him with another Dom bull. he got a girlfriend, he's happy, she's happy, you're happy.
I, personally, have no preference between these three options, so I'll follow whichever one you enjoy most.
Comments
BleakLibrarian
I like this option, Laura and MC can have learned through experience what they want, and don't want in a bull
Cam
I think it's best to remove him, he's left such a bad taste that I think even if you go back and write him better it's already a lost cause in peoples mind. Just start fresh and use him as a springboard that makes the MC FMC consider their doms better, especially a dominant one. It can lead to a very nice moment where they come together to lay down that boundary as a couple and find a better fit.
TimmyTips
I vote for Tara as the new dom bull with the option to dial humiliation play with her up to 11. In session, she's gonna fuck Laura so good Laura won't need a man much less that pathetic sub cuck of a boyfriend, and out of session she'll mix being the most caring person ever with teasing MC. Regarding Oliver or other, I'm down for whatever delivers content fastest. Oliver got shelved almost faster than he could become a character. Dialing the dom and humiliation up with Laura does a lot to compensate for an underdeveloped dom or mid bull like Nathan.
