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Short Story: "Ryan's magical evening"

🕑 Added 2025-04-20 18:28:00 +0000 UTC

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Rob

Honestly i really have nothing negative to say it's pretty good writing, only thing that'd make it perfect is illustrations

Lee Johnson

The writing youve displayed over the years has always been a serious component of why I've been attracted to your work. I ALWAYS enjoyed the short captions along with the art, and 100% prefer them over the textless versions.

e.a.rowe

This, this right here: "But in that moment, he understood a couple of things about the world and about himself." ... captures exactly what I love about your writing. Because that right there is a VERY real moment of epiphany, that happens in the real world more often than folks might think. And when it happens, the results are often profound and life-long... ask me how I know ๐Ÿ˜ Your writing is what drew me in from the very start, and much as I love your illustrations, I don't need pictures to enjoy your stories. You're a gifted storyteller, and I'm so excited to see what unfolds from here... ๐Ÿซถ

Larry

This was great! He penetrated himself vaginally and orally; only thing left is anally.

SpacemanSpliff

Very fun, but..I mean..would make for a great comic lol

Sengachi

I loved this. Ryan made me laugh my ass off, but he was cute and yeah I had fun watching him get fucked.

O.

This was a nice way to start my Monday! Just a tiny little note - in the first few paragraphs, I couldn't figure out where Ryan was in space - lying down, sitting up, or standing.

John

I haven't read porn in years! It used to be a thing. This was pretty good. Maybe could use a little more polishing. Ryan seems like just a stock stud.

Jim Sharkey

I was dubious about this experiment at first, but it came out pretty great.

GoingCocoBob

You know what? Ryan IS a pretty cool guy! I really love your writing style InCase, sorry I donโ€™t have any valuable critic for you, it just was really good :D

BritAnon

Hell yeah, this is awesome. Was a little worried that it might be a little rocky as you swapped over from drawing to writing but you nailed it on your first time. I look forward to seeing more.

Incubus

Honestly, I think 3/4ths of the reason people love your work is because its unique and gives us a unforseen and fantastic story. You've done it here, just without the visual aid. but honestly, this allowed me to imagine every art you could do for this in a fraction of the time. If you want to do more, I'm excited!

Drivestort

My only note is... More!

pj wolf

It's exactly what it says on the tin, and it's pretty interesting at that. He did get laid that night... though not in the way he expected.

RunningGentles

Really hot! Two of my favorite kinks in one story: futas (sorta) and self-cest!

Evui

I could picture this in your style so easily! A very fun read, you did a great job with this! I'm glad that you can find alternate ways to make art while also taking care of your body. Can't wait to read more from you!

Nicholas Feltner

This was good. Hope for a sequel ;)

Chris Giesy

Great story and a very smart guy.

MAR

I love this story, itโ€™s hilarious.

Sunset Lemonade

Very fun, and easy to see the events in my head in your art style, which is cool. The pacing is good too, right amount of detail and internal dialog to action for a short. The tone reads as light and casual, perfect for a himbo like Ryan, and the girls are very yummy; I'm a bit jealous. You've definitely wet my appetite for more shorts like this.

Shawn K. Younkin

Any chance this can be made into a word doc, or something? I can't wait to read it!

Coth

> The good, is that I picked your prompt. :-D > The bad is that you're out from this round of the contest. :'-( jkjk, amazing story! Happy to see it come to life

Aaron Ward (Vampwire)

That was fantastic ๐Ÿ˜Š

NightofTwilight

Congratulations Coth! What's makes this even better the more Incase picks ones they like, the simpler it will become to create writing prompts tailored to their interests

Zenith Star

This was SUCH a fun read! I am, once again, envious of your characters and the chicanery {affectionate} they get up to. I'd do anything to join that sorority! *Rattling the bars of my enclosure* ANYTHING, you hear me?!

McMadow

Nice story, Iโ€˜m absolutely ecstatic about more stories from you

Edward Beckwith

i fully expected one of them to Peg him with his own tool... maybe in the sequel.

Dead Man Talking

Hell yeah! Just Incase (ha) you can't draw, you can always write.

Gezz

Nice this turned out great!

William Kim

It's a shame this won't be drawn but your style comes through your writing quite nicely!

Justin H

the return of the king

Zhukel Dror

As a Ryan, I was shocked to see this a little lol.


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