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Puazi Vote Driven Story :: part 0 ::
🕑 Added 2025-05-26 15:27:26 +0000 UTCI want to try something somewhat new for this patreon. We've done vote driven story, but never like this. Every week you'll be asked to vote on how a smutty story continues and evolves. This is the pre-story update where we decide some general things.
In the past I would have called this a Choose Your Own Adventure, but I think it's inaccurate. What would be a better term? Vote Driven Story, shortens to VDS which sounds weird.
Each episode will consist of a short story, around 2k words and a simple illustration. Comics take too long to draw each episode, and illustrations are too limited for storytelling. I hope that a short smutty chapter plus a simple drawing would be a good compromise between ease of creation and content quality.
================= Ok, but what's the story? =================
As you can guess from the title of this post we're focusing on the Puazi. If you don't know what those are, check this post out. TL;DR they're sexy, horny aliens that go in Heat when they smell humans. There is a pill to manage it though.
I have a couple of different story hooks in mind, and I want the audience to decide. Whichever option wins this vote will be the starting point of the VDS. I have kept the options gender/age non specific, as you'll vote on that next week.
The protag of the story is a Puazi and the story will be written in second person. Here's the options:
A)You're a Puazi that decided to stop taking the Heat supressing pill after years of deliberation. Now you're ashamed to find yourself driving late at night to a certain shady part of town where Puazi's that are up to no good are rumored to frequent...
B)Your slutty Puazi friend Natalia convinces you to try lowering your pill dosage to have more fun in life. You agree to try it out for fun, and the two of you go out to find some trouble together. Trouble ensues.
C)You're working at your office, late at night, when you realize that you've forgotten to take the pill for... You don't even remember how long. Damn it, you've been so busy! You should probably do it soon... Your coworkers are starting to smell really, really, really good to you.
D)You're taking the subway to work, when a bunch of sweaty college students get on lugging around sports gear. You're on a low dosage of the pill, but their smell is starting to get to you regardless. You should probably switch trains, lest you do something embarrassing. Or maybe... Maybe it would be fine to stay for a bit?
This vote will end on Monday 2nd of June
Multiple choice is enabled. If it doesn't work on mobile, try it on desktop.
Comments
InCase
It got tagged with violating patreon community guidelines for some reason. I sent them a message about it and I am waiting on a response
HARK!
Not sure of this is the best place to ask, but what happened to the second part of "I will never forgive you"? It's gone, at least for me.
Shawn K. Younkin
Something with Puzai vagina eating! Curious to know how it would taste. 😋😋😋
Stephen Wells
Everyone voting C because of the way Incase draws people dressed for office work and doing not-safe-for work :)
shadowscribble
Aww, I had just crafted a good story set up for when/if another round of ideas.
InCase
I am working on a document that answers (almost) all of these questions. I need some more time to get it together, but it should be ready sometime in the next couple of weeks.
HARK!
Can we use this story to get additional information about the Puazi in general? Such as how they came to Earth, what their planet of origin is like, how their lifestyle was on it, how their biology functions apart from the heat, are they the only lifeforms that came to Earth from their planet, or did other organisms come as well, etc. If that would be too awkward too seamlessly incorporate into the story, then perhaps a sort of Puazi data sheet could be made? That could be designed to be diegetic. It could be made like a page or pages from a college textbook about xenobiology.
InCase
Right now my hand is better than it had been in months. Writing doesn't really bother it which is why I've pivoted towards it so hard. I am still limited in how long I can draw every day without pain, but it's getting better.
Erick Sanchez
I’m so excited to go back into your Puazi world, Inc. thank you for all you do, and hope that hand is getting stronger and doesn’t hurt you too much. Personally I’ll always be on the side of your rest and recuperation over pace of content, wish you the best
