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Slumber to Chaos

🕑 Added 2019-06-24 02:54:56 +0000 UTC
Slumber to Chaos

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Priscila Nosoma

I'm a bit confused by this story board. When it is placed actually? Correct me if I am wrong, but as I remember, wasn't it the rabbit that warned Alice of the fire and woke her up? I remember a clip from AMA where she was sleeping with her rabbit plush, then it comes to life and tells her to run and save herself?

This storyboard certainly whets the appetite, though I like the idea of Alice navigating her way around the house and avoiding Bumby, who’s lurking around the place with evil intent, although she doesn’t yet know it. One query - isn’t that overhead lighting in the operating theatre rather too modern for the 1860s?

Morgan LeFay Dethen

Sometimes you just need a LuLu.

Oh my God, the storyboard is amazing! This has to be the beginning of the game! I am so hyped!

I also think Alice's hallucination of the centaur should really show up here at some point.

Hey all! A few notes on the opening. Cool concept, but I think there's a kill your darlings moment that we need to have about the snowman. The sequence is cute, it's a great idea to have Alice explore the home, but I think it'd be better if it was Alice sneaking around the house during one of her father's dinner parties where Bumby lies in wait and Alice has to navigate around without being caught by her mother, father, or Nanny Sharpe (who should be alluded to if we're going to show a governess, not sure who the ol' granny is in this concept). This is a way you could add tension to the opening, while introducing stealth mechanics that will be important later and it's a better way of showing Alice's broader world. At least in my opinion.

LuLu 😄👍❤


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