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Alice and the Chalice of Malice

🕑 Added 2019-08-19 09:22:53 +0000 UTC
Alice and the Chalice of Malice

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Make Nine Inch Nails great again

I loved the Queen of Cups scene in La Danza de la Realitad. Like the "drop of water overflowing the vase" or the teardrop causing a tsunami.

Welcome to our new inmates please do not wreck our asylum now...SUGGESTIONS 1st the goblet goblins: I say give them more of a goblin look, like in madness returns I loved fighting them 2nd to card guards, maybe have goblins in tea armor, 2nd: Anger: maybe have Alice's white rabbit a prisoner to the red queen having her being raged at the queen and personifying (god I fucked that spelling up) as the fire and in the end the red queen saying Alice created her? I do want the card guards to bleed and look more like what they did in the first Alice game

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That version of the queen looks disgusting. I love the cups that Omri did, especially how they're strapped to the machine legs, king of reminds me of the straps you would see on a straight jacket. I imagine the machine legs could be similar to the ones that are carrying the heads of Alice's parents (As Omri did them in older artwork).

Bravo!! I like very much where you are heading with the development of this structural themes. Btw, I'd like to input my grain of salt: it's about anger, that most times what actually lies beneath it is grief with the clothes of anger (according to a psycology story) so that justifies the importance of this theme a great deal, maybe you can play around with that. One of my favorite ideas where this takes place revolves around the box demon transformation of the first Alice game, which could (definitely should in my opinion) portray this emotion in two ways: first as an unavoidable possession that can't be actually seen and then as something that merges and changes forms as a physical enemy. These forms could be 4 main stages that later on when defeated merge into 1, which I think would be cool if it strongly resembles the demon box transformation that is a pale image of what it used to be in that point of the story.

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"Strange that duty has crossroads. Responsiblity can be a labyrinth." The Man Who Laughs

Definitely not Adam Driver

The cups and car guards looks really cool! "Instead, I suggest we tinker with a more general "anger against the world" theme. " I think that's a good idea, it's waymore childish and would fit her age better.

The setting is nice, love the idea of Anger as a theme. I hope we get to see Alice herself always expressing that sort of Anger in this part of the story. I'm neutral towards The Queen's design, as long as we get to see a rendition of either Alice or Lizzie at some point as one of two Queens (maybe both?), like previously mentioned here on Patreon, I'm honestly fine with whatever direction her design takes. The Cup enemies sound fun! Maybe make them a whole tea set? Have the pot, cups, spoons, plates and so on as a whole be one enemy (or maybe a mini-boss of multiple enemies, each corresponding to one theme of the set) that Alice gets to fight against at some point midway through the Anger chapter (I'm thinking somewhere in the castle's garden, in the centre of a hedge maze -and maybe have the crying Alice statue overlooking the "arena"?- waiting for our Alice to jump into the battle. Can't wait for the Cheshire Kitten Set to drop! I'm just slightly worried because my address will change soon and I don't want it getting lost like the Asylumn Tag almost did. I think so far, everything is moving quite nicely, with everything getting done great!

I can see Alice being mad at the world in general. Trying to find someone to blame. Destroying everything in her path not caring who she takes down in her path for (revenge?) I definitely feel that this realm in particular could use alot of Asylum elements in terms if design and layout. I've definitely been looking forward to this. I like the cup enemies but I almost wish it was a creature with the cup chained to it's back like its carrying a burden and spilling hot tea kn his poor back! The card guards need to be less zombieish I do like the fabric over the face tho! That works for me! But no zombies. Is this our final render of the Queen or just what child Alice believes she will appear. Or will she look more like Alice like in Omris first image if her? Love everything so far!!


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