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Fueled by Anger

🕑 Added 2019-09-11 01:02:38 +0000 UTC
Fueled by Anger

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I do like the idea of the PTSD stages. As I have PTSD myself, I think it’s important to add that into a story of a young girl who has gone through so much trauma, and is now grown up, dealing with the issues that one with PTSD truly has to face before they can heal. Just for an idea, I stayed quiet for years about my trauma because of the confusion & embarrassment, I tried to pretend it didn’t happen but I couldn’t. Eventually I felt like I was losing it. They actually found that if you let PTSD go untreated that it causes damage in part of the brain. I’m working on it now, but it took years to finally talk about it. Depending on what the original trauma was (or many near the same time period) and if there’s re-traumatization, each story is different but we all have to get through the versions of each stage in our own way. It’s definitely a good subject to have in the game. 👏🏼🖤

Jane Moffet

If you want to make that a weapon okay do it. fallow your passion i say just make it as epic as possible because Alice is mad and angry not a conducive environment to a really calming mini-game slash weapon or less it's epic.

Definitely not Adam Driver

That courthouse and Throneroom looks amazing!

"Justice" and "judgement" are easy to misinterpret, especially in chaos. Its a wonderful theme to explore.

Yeah, especially when hypervigilance is a pivotal factor for PTSD. That hypervigilance uses emotion to be on edge, ready to fight back, flee, freeze, or hide. The cycle of flashbacks are a maladaptive survivor mechanism which can use emotion as a mask to survive.

Please make the Guinea Pig judges part of the game <3

Here's some ideas that are also in the Discord: * The trapped sun is pretty cool and it makes me think it'd be a neat idea to recontextualise the rage mode in AMA by explaining that you achieve that form by drinking small portions of that sun that have been placed in a bottle. * I imagine a scene where she is at court and she stands in the defendant's position with a noose around her neck and a trap-door at her feet. "There are so many criminals," the Queen of Hearts would remark, "that we like to get on with the execution immediately once we have proven their guilt!" * You could riff on the Disney movie by having Chesh appear on the Queen's behind and the way to get out of the punishment is to hit him and cause him to yell out in pain, thus distracting the Queen and company and allowing for your escape. You'd be hitting Chesh with a well-aimed croquet shot, of course. Only, it wouldn't be pointed out to you explicitly, so you could very well carry on with the game for a while without realising and it could really go on forever. Could even have a fun achievement if you play the croquet for a certain amount of time that hints that you have to hit Chesh. You could always have it so you've gotta aim for the Queen herself instead.

Venntril

IDEA: I like the amount of fire here and a nice amount of red as well. I do think a nice touch to the landscape would be some sort of molten lava rocks or maybe a “Lava-Fall”. I think statues placed around the level with lava maybe coming out the eyes or mouth like tears flowing out like a burning anger within. -Side note: I’m loving what you’re doing with the game so far I’m totally on board this train!

Sarah Heist

SUGGESTION: It would have to be a reeeeaaallyyy well mechanized golf game. Theres a lot of shoddy mechs out there that makes the whole process more frustrating than necessary. I love your phrasing of anger as an addiction and I think thats something that can be focused on- the addictive nature of each stage and emotion. Maybe that's what can be harnessed in the shadow self of Alice- the idea of WANTING to stay in the harmful place.

Mini croquet game-- yessss!!!

I can't say I'm a fan of golf in video games, but I would love a twisted croquet game! Also I love the pun with croak!

ANYWAYS. That occurs when anger goes unanswered. When the power of voice becomes silenced. For sufferers of PTSD, anger becomes depression. Self inflicted anger that maladaptively is trying to cocoon and protect and numb the victim. What I guess I'm throwing out there is how future stages of grief can tie in with the Queen's theme of the sun and blinded rage/prejudiced judgement.

(GDI I posted before finishing).

I have C-PTSD, and anger is one of THE most havoc raising emotions trauma can inflict on a person. When "justice" goes unanswered, and anger has no grip to reach on an unfair reality, it backlashes back onto yourself. The brilliant fires of rage of a distraught sun collapses onto itself, cooling, dying, transmutating into a black hole. For sufferers of PTSD, this can become headaches, IBS, chest pains, ect. The anger attacks the victim, suffering silently in a cool vaccuum of a dead star.

"Depression is merely anger without enthusiasm" is quintessentially Cheshire Cat! Literally heard it in his voice in my head as I was reading it :)

Rosuav

Love the idea of a croquet minigame, but do please ensure that the controls make sense on all platforms. Alternatively, a "skip" option will be a help for those who struggle (or just make it a side quest).


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