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Humpty Dumpty and The Sky Pirates

🕑 Added 2020-06-05 00:40:22 +0000 UTC
Humpty Dumpty and The Sky Pirates

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Karma Chameleon

I like the subtle and stealthy moon, everything in Wonderland has a purpose to serve, even if it is abstract and may not make sense at first, it does, in the end, have to be focused on its purpose. I feel an attack moon would be counter-purposeful. Though I do like the sketch. Maybe there could be smaller versions of the moon seen around and the Manipulators attack via helicopter attack moon-manipulator-mech.

Slap a Decepticon logo on that transforming moon and now we're talking!

Hex

Humpty Balloon and Humpty pilot is a perfect combination! 100% YES!

Koukin

I love the idea with Humpty Dumpty, far less the moon.

Sarah Heist

......I like attack helicopter moon...

If Humpty speaks the first time we hear him could be via a "loudspeaker " so Alice is at first taken aback thinking that the balloon is speaking to her... I mean she's seen some weird stuff so it could work.

I really like the idea of Humpty being the pilot. Like American said, it can be the reason why the balloon looks like him and it gives Alice a co-pilot while she defends it. Although, his balloon canines kind of make him look like a vampire. Taking it a step further, why would Humpty help her? Would Alice trick him into using the balloon as an escape? Such as, he tells her about his test for the balloon and Alice asks to tag along. Maybe he asks a favor before allowing her to join? I’m also with American on the moon. As much as I love anime and automatons, I think it detracts from the moon’s purpose. I think I could get behind the first few sketches where the moon becomes… erect? Straight? Either way, I think the curves becoming straight while getting closer to whatever he’s chasing could work. But I can’t think of a practical reason for it. Maybe it could help him open his mouth? Anyway, loved the stream! Can’t wait to hear more!


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