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Moves, Bosses, Faces, and Babies

🕑 Added 2020-07-12 22:46:29 +0000 UTC
Moves, Bosses, Faces, and Babies

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Karolina Belomestnova

When I saw the turtle-crab, my first thought was: Omega Flowey (aka Photoshop Flowey) from Undertale. It’s because of the green elements and the overall shape. I’m not sure that’s the vibe you want to go with. The jellyfish is cool, but kind of underwhelming for a final boss. At least, on its own. However, I think if you combine the two ideas - the mech and the jellyfish - it could be cool. Destroy the mech suit in Phase 1 of the boss fight, and then the jellyfish boss, who pilots it, comes out for Phase 2.

Omg could you imagine the chess world being completely white black and red and you don’t see a single other color until towards the end- like a small glowing green light you notice and follow and then BAM the green light is big and radiating off the boss now in front of you. Or you notice a trail of blue tile pieces that leads you to a scene reminiscing about something— disclaimer though I don’t have complete knowledge on the color language of this game so i can’t say what would represent what besides the obvious reds, blacks, and whites

For Chess World, maybe there could be duplications of a structure as chaos and order forms: ex. black ornate birdbaths scattered in one area but white birdbaths overflowing with red water/liquid scattered in another

Sarah McKeegan

Love the idea of the chess realm! I like the thought of it moving or changing .. but it seems a little too busy. And I love the tapestry!

I love looking at all the concept art reference models of Alice they're great and I really hope we get more of Lizzy and Alice's parents in the near future

These concepts look interesting, looking forward to initial 3d models. Keep up the great work.

Saleh Abu-Rashid

They all look great to me. To me. Depression if it were a color it would be white. White was always a nerve-wracking color to me. The color white is mostly avoided when making websites because it blinds for example. Not only that but in prison, there is a method to punish prisoners by keeping them in a white empty space room that is always lit. Keeping them there for hours apparently is so bad that it could be considered torture. That's just a small example of the color white. A flashing white color space would be like an empty void.

Nova Rose

The face looks so much better! She looks a little younger, more faithful to the 2D art, and also a little more alien (which, after watching the stream, it's clear that's something you're shooting for). Can't wait to see the turnaround for it!

I like very much the concept of the chess realm, maybe I’ ll do more small the squared pieces floating around. Looking it seems that the bottom part is very detailed and that bigness ruins a little the effect xD but make some try xp Thanks for the adjustment to the Alice face, it looks much better :) I can’ t wait to see the last version xD for the boss, I like more the squid because it’ s more misterious maybe, but the other is more a super boss because of the size, and some mechanical elements. So it depends by the mood that you want to give x) the squid seems more weak too. But great job really!

Catheryn Alice North

you were asking which one between the Turtle-Crab and the squid, I think the Turtle-crab looks more intimidating ^_^ Good job Omri on the face alterations ^_^

I like the sky tiles and the white giving off light the face changes are perfect

I love the design of the chess realm, the idea of the moving pieces above, and the changes made to Alice were perfect!

Yes! Omri did a perfect job showing the changes that need made. She looks much younger now.

Jaded Entity

Some very good designs and it does appear to be progressing very nicely. I have to say I think the Red Cheshire image would look great on a shirt.

Adjusted Alice model looks way better!

An amalgam of the two bosses might be fun. Have the former be the look if the boss beast/construct, but rather than Mock Turtle riding it, he could be floating above in something similar to the latter image.(tethered to the beast perhaps)

I absolutely love this concept!! It’s so visually and aesthetically pleasing, but also sound like it would be fun to play! Well done guys :) and the adjusted Alice model honestly looks x100 better, she’s so cute!

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

An example of the kind of puzzle you could do with the mirror concept is that you are in the Pale Realm, you have to enter a door to progress but the button to open the door is broken . Then you see a mirror showing the same door in the Red Realm. The door there is impassible but the button is functioning. You enter the mirror, fight off a wave of Chaos infected chess pieces before pressing the button which opens the door in the Pale Realm.

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

And Omri’s edits to the face are perfect. That’s more like it

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

I would still like to see if you could incorporate the mirrored versions of the chess realms. In AMA the chess themed area was broken up into two, a black and white area called the Pale Realm and a red and white area which didn’t have a name, but let’s call it the Red Realm. Since the Chess stuff is from Through the Looking Glass, I thought it would be cool to have Alice travel between the peaceful Chess Realm ruled by the white pieces, and then walk through a mirror into a red version where chaos has taken over and the Red Queen rules. Using mirrors could present cool puzzle opportunities.

I LOVE how the Chess Realm looks! I agree, it’d be really cool to see them drift through the sky, and give a lot of shadows and depth to the environment. Mock Turtle boss looks AMAZING, I can’t wait to see more! The adjustments you’ve made to Alice’s 3D model overall make her look so much better!! You guys are doing such a wonderful job! (Also Lucky looks absolutely adorable haha!)


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