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Stuck in Time; Like Snails in the Rain

🕑 Added 2021-01-21 01:53:53 +0000 UTC
Stuck in Time; Like Snails in the Rain

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Lucas Severin

these illustrations are Awesome.

You could put in a drop down feature so you have to click it to spoil it?

Its okay bro we are all fucked XD we just do the best we can. I appreciate your work. I'm trying not to get too excited but I can't help it. Get well soon much love 💘

Sarah McKeegan

Feel better! And I love the illustrations and everything!!

Juan Romero

And get well soon American, hope moving to the new house goes smoothly.

Juan Romero

Oh, I feel so embarrased, Joey is a she! I'm spanish and thought Joey was a masculine name. Criticism aside, her works are stunning, those were my two cents regarding productivity alone.

oh I see it now, in a quick glance my brain said to expect more in the difference

American McGee

Thank you.

American McGee

They are BOTH presented in this post. Brighter up top, darker down below.

American McGee

Juan, I've been telling Joey exactly this for years... going back to her days at Spicy Horse. And have also explained that it would save her a lot of work. She doesn't seem to care though... because she still continues to deliver "finished" work without ever showing us a preview. Maybe your comment will help her change her ways?

Saleh Abu-Rashid

Darn. I read a bit from the spoiler.

Hope you and the family get well soon such a bummer getting a cold

Juan Romero

About Joey's painting, being a painter myself, the polished rendering on his painting is a lot of work, I think he should submit a rough version first, because if not, then there's many hours of work that go to the trash, like in the scene of the snail, if it fits then you can develop it further but I imagine how he'd feel about his painting going "oh, its a great piece...but not really what we are going for"

were we supposed to see the same snail pic twice? or both versions of it? (I look forward to seeing the brighter version) - it looks great I love the duchess pic, but it's a bit too "classic". I would expect/prefer a twist on her like the one omri suggsts

Anna Lepper

Hope you feel better soon American! My husband just got cleared to go back to work from the 'Rona. I don't know about skeletal vs reg Duchess, but the art as presented is GOREGOUS! Love the dynamism of the Circus scene too.

Nicholas Brokaw

... good point 😂 ... I still literally feel physically uncomfortable when I play that part. Even though there isn’t anything “wrong” about it, I try not to look because it just feels too weird.

Nicholas Brokaw

Good idea. It is certainly going to be big one 🏋️

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

That’s exactly why we should do it. Because it would be weird and uncomfortable. Exactly the kind of feeling this series forces players to feel. This is the series that made us walk through a baby doll’s crotch.

Nicholas Brokaw

Oh yes. I must’ve misread that part. Changing up The Duchess might be odd. If it’s done right though then I’m good with it. I don’t know if I’d be onboard with The Duchess breastfeeding her pig baby though. You are right about the game being in a unique position, but I think I’d still find it a little weird.

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

With American being so busy moving house, and as wordy as my forthcoming community post will be, I’m gonna hold off until after American has settled in, out respect of him and his time.

Lucky Dragon ‘She.They’

My preference would be to keep the original Duchess design. I mean I’ll go along with a new interpretation, but what is the motivation behind changing the design radically? Personally I think Joey’s original is great. The setting is a little too, ‘normal’ though. And some imagery I would like to see that I don’t think any interpretation of Alice has ever attempted that I can remember is to have the Duchess breastfeeding her pig baby. And I think this game is in a unique position to do that.

The artwork scenes look very good. Outline looks like it’s moving well. Good luck and have fun with the move!

Nicholas Brokaw

Those are looking INCREDIBLE!!! The proposed sketch of meeting The Duchess would probably be more fitting, but from a pure art standpoint, the current one is looking good too (and I love the face of Shadow Alice [at least, I think that’s her]). I’m REALLY loving The Circus image as well! Good luck with the move and I hope you begin to feel better soon! And of course, I’ll still be here thinking of ideas! Speaking of ideas, a handful of the Insane Children (including me) had a big discussion about the game’s developments so far. I think Lucky Dragon was going to post something on the Community tab about it, but I’m not sure about it yet. Regardless of that, I’ll probably get something up there by the end of the week.


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