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Completely Taken By Chaos (Live Stream SOON)

🕑 Added 2021-08-30 00:37:06 +0000 UTC
Completely Taken By Chaos (Live Stream SOON)

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It needs to be more terrifying, Blood, creepy smiles, rotting flesh ect.. but still keep a human aspect. I like last one a lot more than just tentacles

I think it literally can be more chaotic just like how the example looks like. Right now they are like people with tentacles, but not really taken by them. I do like the idea that some body parts are ripped off but linked by the tentacles...It gives a strong feeling of "that is a thing", you can clearly see it's not the person himself who is controlling this body, which I prefer as a chaotic creature.

Finally read the script haven't gotten to the ending yet wait for my feedback a little longer if we have a little bit more time

Karma Chameleon

I love the tentacles. creepy but not just for underwater type themes. I think a fungi look would look good as well.

I like how it still shows that human body as like a host and not just a monster very interesting mix

Nicholas Brokaw

I agree that there should be a bit more going on than the tentacles covering them, but this is great for a start! Perhaps there could be some parts where the tentacles occasionally retract back into their body to reappear in fuller mass at another place?

Ashley

I LOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEE the tentacles love them, but i do think adding something more could be good. maybe blood coming out of the spots the tentacles broke through the body. maggots eating away at the body.

I too think "just tentacles" in the final form isn't quite enough, and Junji Ito's work could be a great inspiration for that bit of extra (long neck as above, extra face, creepy oversized toothy grin, gaping holes where the eyes should be...)


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