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Birth of The Shadow

🕑 Added 2021-11-15 00:17:26 +0000 UTC
Birth of The Shadow

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Juan Romero

Why has dark Alice a scythe in D?

Karma Chameleon

My favorite part of the script was the reveal that we have been playing as Shadow Alice, it made her actions feel more justified as we have experienced it with her, not a faceless stranger. My favorite illustration... I love the Shadow from illustration C and I love it paired with the rest of illustrations of A match the mood perfectly. Very exciting!

C or D

Stephanie Groth

C is thr best, D is a good runner up. This is so cool! I love this concept!

Sarah McKeegan

A or D

Saleh Abu-Rashid

Almost read spoilers. Sneeky

After taking some time to really examine these i think i would have to say 'D' is the one i like the most. It thoroughly shows the anguish and struggle Alice is dealing with. Additionally, the Shadow is a great representation of innocence and death. The Shadows Face (mask?) looks to be crying out, maybe sorrowfully, while with one hand it's reaching out, to Alice, a sign of "I see your pain and it hurts me, but I can help", while the other hand holds the scythe confidently, almost familiarly, ready to swing at a moments notice. Thought: Is Alice holding the scythe in this scene or is it holding here? The Scythe could be a manifestation of her guilt and from THIS scenes perspective, Alice is holding it, But from the perspective of the Shadow, the Scythe, a representation of her ability to kill, might be holding her...

I really, really like B. Alice is noticing her Shadow, her Shadow is clearly trying to communicate with her, (perhaps almost pleading with her, in a sense) and as said above, not reveling in Alice's pain. B speaks to me.

Nicholas Brokaw

I really like A for this one, especially The Shadow’s stance.

Greyson Kehm

I say A or D. Alice is obviously having a hard time, while Shadow Alice doesn't appear to be enjoying her host's pain.

A is my favorite. I like the emotions conveyed on young Alices face. The shadow seems triumphant like she's yelling or perhaps roaring and thst is the best part about this picture for me.

I also like B, and it goes with the dialog for Alice to be kinda surprised or shocked to the fact that what she sees is herself, but I feel like Shadow Alice looks kinda evil in those sketches, she is fierce and dark but she looks like she is having fun while watching Alice siffer.

A or D

I like the body language of Alice in "B", like she's turning behind and wondering "did I really just see what I thought I saw?". Perhaps it could be redone and in the asylum with orderlies dragging her down the hall and Shadow Alice isn't comically floating around like a ghost but just a reflection in a cracked mirror she passed by? I feel like "less is more" would work here and create a more ominous tone.

B looks pretty cool.

I really like D. Shadow Alice looks so menacing compared to all the other versions and she looks like she would take control and protect what ever she has taken.

Death of Ink

So all this time I was actually playing as an aspect of Alice and not Alice herself??!


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