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🕑 Added 2017-12-09 23:22:12 +0000 UTC 4/12 of decemberI didn't have this planned, but I promise to you that the mirror was there from the first render of the room. In fact, you can see a bit of it in page 46.
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Fixed too! Thank you very much ;)
mckthomp
Yes. Hand mirror. Looks good now. Though, if you capitalize 'From,' then I think 'do you' should be capitalized too. I could be wrong about both of them though.
Thank you very much! I have fixed it. Just one doubt: when you said "a mirror" you mean "a hand mirror" instead of "any hand mirror", right? Or there is any other problem?
Oh! Don't expect too much, it's just so Arya can watch herself easily.
Bob Fink
Very nice page, I look forward to seeing what the mirror is going to be used for 🙂
mckthomp
Nice. But it should be 'a' mirror, 'There's one,' and 'those books.' I'm not sure if 'from' should be capitalized. I see your use of the '...'. It sounds to me like the character would say this as two incomplete sentences.
