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Crash [P23-28] Sequence New Page!

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 03:51:31 +0000 UTC

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Spoogiehowl

Im so glad it does Sammich! Yeah I think from now on I will make supplemental group posts like this as follow up's to the single posts.

Sammich

Posting in chunks like this does help get across a quieter tone, that is for sure

Spoogiehowl

These words mean so SO much to me Catcouch, seriously.🙏 Environments are slowly dripping away as a fear and dread to me and becoming something of a joy!

CatCouch

Your environmental work here is so good I am really impressed and inspired! This is genuinely phenomenal art. It sets the scene so well.

Spoogiehowl

I’m ecstatic reading this!! Thank you Maren for the feedback 🥲🙏. The lighting especially on the last two pages was so eye opening to try and do. I found out some new color combos that I’d really like to pursue in future works. And I’m glad that this last page has an ominous mood and mystery to it. I was originally going to have a shot with a hand on the door, but opted out of it to press the mystery! My main concern with the combat ready pose was that given the passage of time, I’d assume she’d have assessed she was in a bed, tucked in, and mended so for her to go on such an offense might be a little negative towards her morality character. But I might be overthinking this, due to the circumstances after all lol.

marenoodles

I appreciate the sequence post! I'm loving the landscapes and lighting, especially on page 28. Also, I'll admit that Holt's turn toward the door does look like battle prep to me. It's not just that panel that gives me that vibe -- the tall shadow and slightly cracked door both feel ominous to me (and I love it), so I would probably be on guard if I was her lol.

Spoogiehowl

I’m so happy she’s resonating this 😁🙏. Because this cutie is about to get involved in some lewd shenanigans!

Darth_Rondoudou

She's such a cutie

Al

A possible suggestion for this would be to make some small motion lines to indicate arm movements, I'm thinking.

Al

I looked at your notes after the page, and my first thought was she was turning to stretch in a back and forth manner, but looking again I can see it looking like she's cracking her knuckles.