Crash [P32]
🕑 Added 2025-04-10 01:41:11 +0000 UTCHolt gives it her best shot with introductions... really having to go out on a limb! hopefully something gets through, or at least that she has good intentions!
Notes
Speech bubbles have been an ever present growing pain, but I think I'm beginning to head towards a not so "Clip art" looking feel for them. Those perfect circles from the vector tool, just don't look right next to drawings that are not so mechanical.
Comments
Spoogiehowl
Hahahha XD I have a suspicion that things won’t be 100% clear in translation lol. Thank you so much for enjoying all the pose work Maren!! In any exposition page I try to give at least some spicy shots when possible. As for holts blushing, that red is about to go from subtle to flushed in a few more pages!
marenoodles
very cute nonverbal communication and that little bit of blush as Holt works through this. I'm very curious to see how Tina will interpret this because I honestly have no clue lol. Also, the poses and lighting are very good, and all the different angles of Holt's boobs and belly are definitely appreciated <3
Spoogiehowl
I think you may be right Darth XD. the message will definitely have some jumbledness to it hahaha. we must hope for the best!
Darth_Rondoudou
she's so cute... But why do I have the feeling she's not conveying the right ideas... ^^"