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Crash Bonus - [P50 WIP] (ongoing) (Journal Updated V1)
🕑 Added 2025-06-19 17:23:28 +0000 UTCthis post will be updated as progress is made
**Notes 2**
Made a minor change to the wording of the third bubble. “I need to find where they land” sounded too steril to me, so changed to “ Just Gotta” to add some realism to the mental thoughts.
Spent some extra time looking into boob shapes for the zoom in. I did not want to go for the perky round I’ve been displaying in other panels where things are farther away. This goes for a little pressure coming from the right top, as well as a gravitational weight towards the bottom center.
**Notes** So for this page I want to solidify Holt is actively making progress towards her goal. not only to add believability to her character/scenario, but also to setup a more satisfying conclusion to her transformation.
I also thought some wordplay could make for a fun addition to this exposition. With her speaking about finding where the traders "Land" and pairing it with a sequence of "Landing" the spoon on her tongue.
It will be done with zoomed-in shots that show off her anatomy! This will feature a mouth position one could think of for a different kind of event, and a drip on cleavage that sets up multiple things I want to move towards.
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