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SUTD - Chapter 6: Dinner or Breakfast (13)
🕑 Added 2023-02-25 14:32:54 +0000 UTCI know I've said I'll utilize "show, not tell" but trust me, this is necessary.
You guys know I don't draw female characters a lot (for obvious reasons) and I'm kinda struggling when it comes to keeping Carla's face consistent lol. I'll work on that.
Also, world's most useless fact: this is the first time I've reached 13 pages in a chapter. More will come soon!
Edit: there was a typo in one of Carla's dialogues lol I fixed it.
Comments
Luiyere
I am so curious to know more about them and their back stories. I wanna know more about D but even more about Gio! Iām in love with him.
Helbai
I'm so happy to have you guys around
Dunabran
The "show" is always great. But some "tell" is always appreciated. We love to see Henri and D, but knowing more of them is great šš»
Ansixilus
This *is* showing us, rather than telling. You didn't hand us a character reference page with his backstory, it's being explained *in* story. We're not getting pulled out to have something explained to us, but seeing character interactions that are also explaining a thing. I for one think this is a fine way to get a little exposition in.
