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BLACK WIDOW: Biochem Menace - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

🕑 Added 2020-04-23 19:55:28 +0000 UTC

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ukyo_rulz

Not really my thing TBH. It hits a lot of incredibly specific kinks but if you like them I think this will be a good book for you. The only criticism I would make is that the "naughty activities obscured by pink smoke" gimmick seems like a technique for more mainstream, softcore work and not an explicitly pornographic book.

Spooney Bard

Black Widow faces an original foe in Victor Tianlong's Biochem Menace, a step in the right direction for a group of stories that have been weak for years. Its a tale of two stories, cut right down the middle. The first is a bit weaksauce. Natasha gets hit by a gas that makes her insatiably horny and open to a trio of henchmen's desires. By making her open to anything the villainy of the bad guys doesn't connect, they have no bite and become disembodied dicks. If she needed the relief of their dicks but she personally was opposed this would've added an interesting dimension. The second is great, a sex battle between a maniacal murderous old school mad science villain and a heroine brilliantly pornified. Page 7 really could have been page 4 and gave the Doctor who organized this defense more time, both for character and sexual release. If a sequel is planned I'd open with her tied up and him going full force, and end with a heroine trying to save her before falling to the gigantic force.