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Catswitched (Rough Sketches)
🕑 Added 2023-04-15 23:09:53 +0000 UTCAlright so to give you a progress update since it has been a while since I've posted, I wanted to share the rough sketches for the next long comic, Catswitched. I normally don't upload work when it's this early into he process but I wanted to gather feedback, so let me know what you all think.
Expect a cleaned up version of this in the coming weeks.
Comments
Lexi M
Was this finished?
LordWit
Love the concept and how everything unfolds! The story idea and dialouge If you wanted some feedback or something to consider, just for dialogue, I was curious why you went more with the sudden semi-hostile response of Adalia calling Adrien a twerp. The particular segment jumped out more than the previous dialogue, in my opinion. I'd maybe tweak this to keep Adalia's more sweet/comforting/descaling tone but manages to only remind Adrien of other problems he'd be potentially facing later as her "job/family/more elaboration on childcare", further making Adrien feel helpless and hopeless.
Jennifer Jones
Love the body swap and also the whole role reversal dynamic!
Halcyone
amazing! great work, love the faces/expressions!
