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Sometimes I write quick little things just for Discord

🕑 Added 2021-02-09 18:38:30 +0000 UTC

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Heather Graham

I'm always surprised to learn what people like. I figured this would just be a short little fun thing based on a fantasy of mine (tweaked for two women) but it was well liked and I'm glad for that. Also, thank you very much for taking the time to write out such a wonderful comment and compliment! Especially on something I put together in 15 minutes or so.

Bonaparte

Such an effective short story. I don't know if the magic was in the visceral brevity and the unknowns but I can't help but want to know more about these characters before, after and during like what is going on in their minds as they experience the change. I think the second person point of view was really effective too. Made me think of old choose your adventure stories. Read this one multiple times.


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