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Something Different - Comic Commission Outline
🕑 Added 2022-05-27 20:13:08 +0000 UTCHeeeey! So, I was chatting with an artist about the idea of commissioning two personal little comics - one werewolf and one TG comic. They were into it so we started with the werewolf comic and I put together an outline of what I'd like to see.
This is all in my head without the benefit of being an artist or having it laid out so it's pretty rough and will probably be changed a lot from the final product, but I'm hopeful to get most of these panels done without changing too much. Fingers crossed!
I thought it might be enjoyable for y'all to see the outline I came up with since it's kinda sort of a werewolf TF scene, just written differently.
I'm still going to do my best to have the Big Titty Goth Werewolf Girlfriend caption written by the end of the month. Consider this an end-of-week treat in the meantime!
0. Character is an early 20s black woman. Tomboy look with a spiky pixie cut, black hair, and brown eyes. Slender with average sized boobs. I'm thinking a punk type t-shirt (no bra maybe?) with normal panties some comfortable/sexy terrycloth shorts of some kind. Faint scars of bite marks on her right arm. Your chose where - wherever it's convenient. Unless you have a better idea for an outfit. Barefoot. Probably 162.56 cm tall. The male character is 180.34 cm tall, white with short, curly brown hair. Average body type. Hazel eyes. Light, loose fitting sweatpants with drawstring cords and a t-shirt. About the same age. Roommates. Full moon is visible in any window shots.
1. She's bending over a dresser, hand against the top of it, arched back, ass shoved back, eyes wide in shock with mouth open and head back slightly. Veins standing out on her hand in maybe a clenched shape as if she's clawing the top. Moaning erotically. Maybe a few black hairs scattered over her arms and maybe a few on her neck? Teeth should be vampire-like points (almost unnoticeable) and her ears should have very subtle points with a few more scattered short hairs covering their edges.
2. Crumbling to her knees. Shown from behind with her right hand rubbing her pussy through
her shorts & panties - already wet. Fingernails vaguely pointed and pinched in the middle (kind of like bowing upward?) as they begin to turn to claws. Still nails, though. A few loose hairs showing on her back in the gap between her shirt and shorts. Muscles beginning to grow on her slender frame. Trying but failing to resist the arousal. Left hand on the floor. Some hairs on the backs of her hands. "It's... too... early... Can't... <semi growl kinda noise like you did that one time>"
3. A small shot. Open bedside nightstand, one hand holding the handle for the drawer, the other pulling out a large dildo (with suction cup bottom). Perhaps a few more hairs on hands and arms, nails slightly more claw like. But slightly since it's a slower change.
4. Shot from the front. Both hands on the ground to her side. Kneeling. Her shorts and panties pulled aside. She's riding the dildo - and currently down halfway on it. It's covered in her pussy juice and she's dripping wet with swollen outer labia. Scattered hairs on her pubic mound, labia and inner thighs. Feet splayed to the side and starting to show some changes - forefeet very slightly wider, toenails beginning to fold and curve into claws (but mostly toenails still) and some hairs over the tops of her feet. A thin "happy trail" of hair is growing up to her exposed belly button but not quite reaching. Her ears and fangs are *slightly* pointier. A few scattered hairs over her shoulders. A few on her breastbone. Tongue is curled down, halfway to her chin and vaguely dog-like. Has a bestial, lustful look. "Need to take... the edge off. And then I'll leave. There's time. There's time." (something like that)
5. Same shot but she's leaning forward, curving her back and snarling, really getting into it. If her back is shown at all, there'd be a lump for her tail. Maybe 5% more on her werewolf changes. Eyes turning to gold (not that it would show without color) Some growling/snarling/grunting noises - whatever you like. Her left hand is tearing at her shirt, ripping it and pulling it down to show her breasts and both thick, erect nipples. She's sweating and there's a little more scattered hairs over her body, including her breasts. The "happy trail" surrounds her belly button and is beginning to grow up the middle of her stomach, just a few centimeters past her belly button. Could have some darker spots where her teats will grow in with maybe some slightly dimpled skin to show the start of their growth (on some but not all of them). More obviously muscular and slightly bigger. Shorts are tight against her widened frame. The male character enters. "Hey, I thought I heard..."
6. She's down in a yoga "child's pose" with her hands beside her, hiding her face. Good chance to show sweat-soaked fur growing over her spine and the slight curve of her 2.54 cm stubby tail. Ears are sharp, pointing through her hair and furred. Fingernails and toenails are full-on claws and her splayed feet are wide and beginning to lengthen. Could show some faint paw pad outlines on her feet. Her big toe should stay a big toe and not turn into shrunken dew claws. She's trembling and still on the dildo, down to the base but not sure if it's possible to show it. Puddle of cum beneath her. Her shirt is in tatters, barely clinging to her. The male character is kneeling before her, hand outstretched. She could be glaring up at him with her eyes while her head is down. Faint shifts in bone structure on her face to give a subtle wolf-like look. Hairs starting to grow down her brow and out from the base of her ears. "L- Leave!" she says but he says "You're- a werewolf?!"
7. Small panel, his hand on her cheek, raising her head. Her golden eyes stare at him. A mixture of confusion, lust, hopefulness and heat showing. Her nose and upper lip are starting to change a little bit and the hairs have progressed a tiny bit. Fangs are longer. Speech bubble from him - "Change me. I've wanted-"
8. Another small panel. Her eyes are closed. Very very slightly more facial changes. She's licking his palm while gripping his wrist and arm with her hands.
9. Another small panel. Closeup of her kissing him. Face is again very very slightly more changed. Wanting to highlight the wolf vs. human here. He's holding her cheek still and, if it works, she's holding his... hair maybe? In a clawed fist? Drool and maybe some blood (if possible to show?) as her fangs slice his tongue - infecting him.
10. From the side, she's kneeling, almost on all fours, pulling his pants down. Long tongue folded around his very erect cock. More changes - especially showing her tail (5 cm long and slightly curled and covered in scattered hairs) and the fur growing thicker on her upper back while spreading down her spine to her tail. Maybe he's wiping blood & drool from his chin and it shows his canines are sharper than they should be? Other hand clenched in her back fur if the position & reach works. Her right hand is gripping the base of his cock, lightly around his testicles. Flared, circumsized cock head. Veiny shaft. Slight bump of her growing paw pad on her hands. More hairs on hand and arms, probably 40% covered at this point? Her nose should be dark black and pebbled with that dark line on her top lip.
11. Male character is throwing his head back, mouth open and eyes closed, brow furrowed. In pain and pleasure as he starts to change. Canines are definitely curving fangs (but still growing) and his tongue is longer. A few hairs on his brow. Left hand against his temple/hair. Veins and tendons standing out. Fingertips could be swollen. Nails are longer, slightly curved at the tip but not pinching in the middle yet. Upper lip has that dog-like pull. Some hairs on his neck. Right hand pulling at the neck at the front of his shirt, accidentally cutting his skin from his sharper nails - hard enough to draw a little blood. Female character has her ass raised, back curved, one hand rubbing her exposed, dripping pussy while the other clenches the male's hip. Her claws cut into his skin so some light blood, maybe. She's got his cock completely in her mouth, down to the base. Her face could be slighly more elongated into a muzzle but not *too* much yet. Her still short tail completely covered in fur. Her shorts are beginning to tear at the seams as she continues to grow more muscular. Some hairs show in the gaps.
12. He's pulling her up, biting at the curve of her shoulder and neck while she growls in ecstasy with her head back a little. One hand on her exposed breast (nails are starting to pinch and bend into claws) and the other hand on her ass. His cock is trapped against her stomach. Her teats are starting to grow in place - maybe flat but the skin is wrinkled. A little more fur in the middle of her belly. Her shorts are struggling to stay together as they continue to tear and her panties are pulled tight against her crotch and expanding waist. They're pulled tight to the side to show her pussy which is engorged and dripping but still human looking. Some fur on the back of his neck, beginning to spread down the top of his spine. Ears are very slightly longer. Start to show excess skin gathering in preparation for the growth of his sheath. His circumsized cock's head could also be straining slightly to a point to show that it's beginning to change. Veins could be less apparent on the shaft as it starts to become smooth. Pre-cum dribbling and tangling with the light fur on her belly. He could mabe be on one knee with the other bent, with his weight on that foot - he's about to pull her up so they're both standing. Her hands - maybe one one the back of his head and the other clawing at the back of his shirt, tearing it?
13. Both standing now, face-to-face. She's ripped his shirt and clawed his back - marking his skin. Fur is spreading along the back of his shoulders and continuing to grow down, reaching between his shoulder blades. More is growing in long scattered strands on top of his shoulders. She's standing on her forefeet on large, half-furred paws that show powerful calf and thigh muscles while he's still flat footed. His sweatpants are pooled around his left ankle & foot but his right foot is free. Her completely torn shirt hangs around her waist, nearly falling off. Exposing her upper body. Her teats have grown in. Still a lot of bare skin showing with patches of fur scattered in typical growth patterns. Her shorts are hanging on by threads and about to come apart. Her panties are stretched and showing runs/tears. He's gripping her ass, pulling her against his cock (which is still changing, less veins again and the head barely shows the mushroom-like tip as it stretches to a wolf-like point). Grinding it against the soft fur on her mound. She's as tall as he is at the moment. His own changes have progressed about 5%. They're "kissing" by licking each other's mouths/chin/nose with their long tongues touching together. Him: "<growl> The... bed..."
14. She's climbing onto the edge of the bed, one knee bent and on the mattress. Looking back at him over her shoulder. He's standing, gripping his sheath and pulling it down. Flashing his teeth while staring at her. Completely nude. His own short, stubby tail is showing and muscles are beginning to be visible. Corded, hardened skin covered by spreading brown hair & fur. Licking his lips and nose with his long tongue while staring at her pussy. His fangs are too big for his mouth and he's drooling. His ears are long, pointed and covered in fur. Cheeks are also dotted in scattered hairs and his bones have *just* started to reshape in his face, lending a very, very slight wolfish look to him. The tip of his nose is starting to turn dark.
15. Small shot. She's up on the edge of the bed, lowering herself to her belly on her forearms and shins, legs spread and her feet dangling over the side. Closeup of him with his nose hovering over her asshole. The tip of his nose is black but not completely pebbled yet. Eyes are golden. Intent. His right hand is gripping the base of her 10 cm long tail. Thin padding growing on his palms now, hairs cover the backs of his hands (and around his padding on his palm) and his arms. Her pussy/crotch is 50% covered in hair and fur. Her inner lips are starting to swell and *just* beginning to fold, gently pulling at her hood & clit at the start of creating her spade. There should be "HUFF HUFF HUFF" sniffing dialogue/sounds as he scents her. His left hand is clawing at her ass cheek, pulling it to the side to expose her.
16. He's licking her with his long tongue stretching from her pussy up to ther asshole and the base of her tail, dragging over her pussy lips and fur. Her pussy is slightly more changed and they're both +5% changed to werewolves at this point with his ears becoming thicker & wolfier & face beginning to elongate. Lots of drool and pussy juice and just really graphic. Could even have the tip of his tongue curled slightly against her pubic mons if it worked out for the length. Touching against her fur.
17. He's standing behind her now. Holding his cock with his right hand and her ass cheek with the other. His thumb claw is gently tugging her still folding pussy lips to open them & show pink inside. The very tip of his cock is touching between her lips. It's smooth and red and longer and thicker now with small bumps at the base where his knot is about to grow. Her cum is dripping down and her tail (longer) is curved. Eager.
18. Very small, focused panel as he pushes - showing just her pussy (crotch) and his cock. Knot is growing. Her pussy continues to change to a spade. Her pussy lips are growing darker - streaks at first by spreading in each of these small panels until they're jet black rather than matching her skin tone.
19. Still very small panel. 3/4 into her. They're still changing. His knot is inflating. Light growling sound effect from him, moans from her.
20. Still small panel. His knot is bulging, spreading her 100% spade pussy but his size prevents him from knotting her. Louder growling and she's screaming? Maybe? Something louder from her. He's leaning into her.
21. He's gripping her wide, powerful hips, pulling back. Claws digging deep. His feet are changing and he's raising his heels but not yet up on his forefeet. At this point, changes should progress in each panel until they're 100% werewolves. Nice smooth change every time.
22. He's raising his right foot onto the bed. Pounding deep into her, spreading her open and almost knotting her.
23. He's on the bed, shoving her forward while bending over her. Starting to mount her properly. Cock pulled back slightly. Him: "Gonna... gonna... knot... <growl>"
24. He's on top of her now, mounting her like a bitch. He's deep and forcing himself deeper until his knot is 50% inside of her. Him: "Knot. Gonnuurhh... Knot... Knuuuhhhhh..." Losing his speech.
25. He's knotted her. Deep inside. Both howling. Clawing & tearing at the bedsheet. Her black spade pussy enveloping his knot, pushing against his pulled back sheath. Locked together.
26. A fading panel as they rut fiercely.
27. A completely black panel.
28. They're in a ruined room that is destroyed by two werewolves mating. He's on his back and she's hugging against his side with her arm flung over his chest. His cock is hidden in a furry sheath attached to his belly. Her pubic mons is covered in fur. They have sharp canines and pointed ears. They're very much human but should have excess fur in the typical growth patterns and sharp fingernails (but not claws). It's morning. Her teats are smaller but still there. Both have a bulge for their tails with a little tiny tip that can barely move. A line of hair covers both of their spines and spreads outward slightly over the back of their shoulders.
29. Small close up panel of her licking his sheath. Her tongue is slightly longer than it should be as a human and she's completely focused and intent.
30. Continued (still a small panel that just shows her mouth and his sheath) - his red, pointed cock begins to emerge as she continues to lick.
31. As above. His cock is out and the knot is inflated. His gripping her head as she takes him in her mouth. Him: "Up, come up."
32. She's straddling him now, raising her hips with his cock held in her hand, pointing it up and pressing the tip against her black spade pussy (like him, her genitals remain changed the day after the first full moon). Her other clawed hand rests against his chest. One of his hands is against her breast, pinching a nipple, the other gripping her hip.
33. She's riding him hard, bouncing against his knot. Dialogue heavy panel. Her: "The Heat. You'll see. Every day. You'll see. God, I've almost exposed myself to you. Begged you to fuck me. Every day. Had to resist. Had to- oh god, oh god, I'm gonna-!" Multiple dialogue bubbles? As long as it fits and has the same sort of message where she's explaining that, ever since she was bitten and after her first change, she's had to restrain herself from begging him to fuck her. Lots of masturbation time & dildos.
34. He's pulled her down, her chest against his - kissing and licking each other's moouths as she continues to bounce on his cock.
35. His hand is on her cheek, she's still close to his chest but raised her upper body. Him: "I've wanted this since- Thank you. I didn't know it was real, thank you. I'm yours." Her: "My mate. My mate. My- oOOOOOOOWWWWL!" Howling as she cums.
36. She's in the bathroom. In panties and a simple shirt. Her pussy is bulging against the band of the panties, barely restrained and soaking the fabric. His cum and hers is sliding down her leg and a lot of it is smeared/soaked into her skin and the little bit of hairs that cover her top inner thighs. Some fur and hair covering her crotch. Messy with cum. Bent over the sink and staring at herself.
37. Small panel showing her reflection looking back. Mirror shows the male character coming in. She's smiling fiercely at him. Hungry. He's nude and his cock is hard outside of the sheath.
38. He's behind her, pulling her panties to the side to expose her. His erect cock is dribbling precum. His other hand is pressing against her back, pushing her down. Him: "I want you again. I can't think-" Her: "I told you. It doesn't stop. I'm yours. Anytime. Anytime. Please, anytime." She's reaching beneath her with one hand, touching his cock to help guide him while her other holds the sink. Her legs are spread and her chest is against the sink.
39. He's bending, licking the fur on her spine, high on her back with his cock half into her spade pussy. She's gripping the edge of the sink, arching her back. A look of absolute ecstasy on her face. One hand of his is pincing one of her teats, the other is massaging her breast.
40. Small panel - a close up of him licking her neck and the edge of her jaw.
41. A close up again, him licking her mouth. Her own mouth is open, showing her sharpened canines. The line above her top lip is dark.
42. Even closer and smaller, showing just the both of their mouths, noses and chins. She's got her mouth open as if moaning in pleasure. His mouth is beside hers back but a little. Him: "My. Mate. Mine." Her: "Yourrrrsss..."
