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Under A Dying Star

🕑 Added 2022-10-08 15:05:29 +0000 UTC

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Heather Graham

I'm afraid I haven't played the game so I don't know

luckmans2

Is it weird that I'm reminded of lethal company when reading this now?

Heather Graham

I absolutely used Enemy Mine as the base idea, yeah! I'm glad you liked it despite the confusing TF and character. I'm slowly working on expanding it a little, but I'm not sure that will help with the confusion.

John Do

I liked it, and it reminded me of the classic film Enemy Mine. But I admit, I too was a little confused about James and the transformation that occurred. Still a great and entrancing read though! :-)

Heather Graham

Thank you so much for the compliment! I'm really glad you read the story and took the time to reply since I spent a lot of time on this. James was assigned male at birth and had top surgery.

luckmans2

This was a long one, but it was beautiful. I enjoyed reading the whole thing. Not a single boring moment. I do have one question though. Did James start out as a girl and get surgery to have guy parts? Or was it the other way around? Aside from that point, everything made sense to me. The adaptability part kind of reminded me of how clownfish adapt to mate. Anyways, I love your longer stories. As they say, bigger is better! I look forward to reading more.

Rusted

Sir dope. Without being creepy you know I read all your stuff. You are truly talented. Thank you.

Heather Graham

What an amazing amount of feedback! I was only expecting a little bit of a focus on one part but you went all in on it, thank you so very much! I've decided that you're my new current best friend. But, no, seriously, it means a lot to hear this.

Rusted

Absolutely! The otherworldly place, alien themes. An interesting transformation with incredible sci-fi elements. It makes me want more to the backstory. I want to understand where "humans" wound up and why the lol cat aliens were so adaptive. Obviously you have clues to their backstory. My mind looks for more. Without trying to make you feel pressured. This is easily a small story like you've done before that could be a series of novels. You do amazing stuff man when your prompted and have inspiration. I hope you never lose it. You know I read your work. I hope your well. Anyway. Amazing work!

Heather Graham

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. Did any part stand out to you?

Rusted

Truly amazing!! This is another great gem!

Heather Graham

I had a ***blast*** with it, especially with their various interactions and trying to create a world around them. I was hoping to get comments on this one so I'm happy you made the time to write something!