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Awakened

🕑 Added 2023-01-07 01:24:53 +0000 UTC

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ItsTheBigBadWolf

I like to think that the initial switch is always a bit of a whiplash, which adds to the flip in perspective, but then also draws the reader in more-so. And of course, no problem at all!

Heather Graham

Thank you! I worried that it'd be awkward because of the 1st person perspective so I'm glad it worked out okay. And thank you for the comment :D

ItsTheBigBadWolf

Enjoyed your switches on perspective in this one, really kept the perception fresh and dynamic. Awesome work!

Heather Graham

Thank you! I don't personally have any plans to continue it but just about all the stories are up for continuation if they're voted on at the appropriate time.

Darkwanderr

I really liked this story and theme @Lycandope, thank you for writing the story. Do you think this one might continue?


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