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The First Date

🕑 Added 2023-04-18 00:33:44 +0000 UTC

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Heather Graham

Thank you so very much for the wonderful comment here! The good news is that this was really really popular. So, if it ever came up as an idea for one of the month's story prompts to continue it, I imagine it would win :) I'm very glad you liked it and I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Stuff like this keeps me happy and writing. And, yeah. She'd probably be a bit possessive...

Elizabeth!

Like some of the other commenters I'd love seeing more to this. It's like the perfect setup for a character coming to terms with new changes and urges with a supportive partner coming to terms with coming off of a relationship that ended poorly, it seems, and now with a VERY possessive (is that the right word?) partner looking for a mate, not a fling. It's like a series of short stories that practically write themselves. Like uhhhh... discrete snippets of their relationship type thing? Now I'm including loaaaads more info here than I intended but I'm trying to make up for some of the commenters not following up :P

SpaceTiger

Honestly it was all amazing from start to finish, but if I had to choose I would say how she wanted him so bad they had to do it right there in the bathroom and she still wants more as well as he. Again, amazing story.

Heather Graham

Thank you! Is there any particular part that stood out for you?

SpaceTiger

Absolutely loved this one, one of my favorite I have read of yours for sure. Hope we get a continuation because I need more haha

Stephen

The fact that both her inner beast and she herself wanted him it was something both could agree on and it's something you don't read about often

Heather Graham

You could also add it to the story prompt thread I posted on Monday! Was there anything that stood out for you?

Stephen

I would definitely want to see a continuation of this story

Heather Graham

Thank you! This one seems, uhhhh, popular. Was there any specific part you liked?

JasonN

This was awesome! She's a fantastic character, and Daniel is a very likable guy. I certainly hope you continue this!!

Heather Graham

Also, did you have a specific favorite part?

Heather Graham

I guess if enough people requested it, maybe. Thank you and did you have a favorite part?

Tag Zedawg

Fuck that was hot AND a great story. You know you have to continue this one, right?

Heather Graham

Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing the character.

SneakyGato

This was incredibly sweet. Loves the thrill of the ending scene


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