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Bound For Hell Ch. 01

🕑 Added 2023-06-03 14:37:37 +0000 UTC

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Falcon316

Pardon the pun, but I liked the slow "burn" approach you are doing with the characters. How she slowly but surely succumbs to her new condition with every step she makes, so it ramps up the tension.

Heather Graham

I actually thought people would get annoyed at that. I don't know that I'll make longer stories very often at all but it's nice to know that some people like them!

William Peters

I think what's standing out is that since you started breaking up stories into parts. It's allowing you more practice on filler details for characters, even minor ones. Allowing for more tension and suspense for us readers as the story progresses.

Heather Graham

Is there any particular thing that stood out that makes you say it's one of my best?

Falcon316

one of your best works. My only complaint is that it was over before it got really good. Looking forward to part 2


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