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To Run, To Hunt... Ch. 02

🕑 Added 2023-07-01 21:30:00 +0000 UTC

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Heather Graham

What a wonderful comment, thank you so much! Wow! And I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying this one. I really hope the last chapter (will be posted on the 15th) leaves you satisfied :)

Ariosto1516

I really enjoy a good slow TF. This has been a really brilliant work. Your mastery of character development in short story form brings this kind of TF the full impact I relish. Keep up the great work and I hope you are having a marvelous summer.

Heather Graham

I look forward to your thoughts on the last chapter around the 14th! Thank you so much, as always, for taking time to comment

ItsTheBigBadWolf

I think you've handled the time skippage well; it's not too long of jumps, so they blend together just fine. Wendy was a great side moment, but pulling her forward was a very good choice. Be curious to see if she ends up saving some money on surgery with some...homeopathic methods ๐Ÿ˜‚

Heather Graham

I really really appreciate the compliment and votes of confidence here since I was worried about both the link and time skipping and also the slowness of the pace. I know I mentioned on the Discord server, but I'm tossing it out here as well - Wendy wasn't even supposed to be a character in this beyond the bathroom line :)

ItsTheBigBadWolf

Really enjoying this longer, slower burn. Also, the slight tension between Rosa and Wendy is very interesting and begs further development! Thanks for putting so much time and effort into a story of this length, you're really handling the long-slow change well.


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