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Kuroneko 黒猫 (Black Cat) - Short Story

🕑 Added 2025-06-11 13:34:50 +0000 UTC

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LKTV 록희 ロッキー

Thanks so much September! Yeah I totally get what you mean! I think I try to translate the scene in my head as closely as I can, and I'm really glad to hear you not only enjoyed it but were able to see what I was putting out there! I will continue for sure! Means the world! ❤️

September

I enjoyed the story, it was very visual if that makes any sense. It may be that I see what I read I'm worse with audio books I actually sit to listen like I'm watching a movie. Keep doing these very cool.

LKTV 록희 ロッキー

Thanks so much for reading man! It means a lot ❤️ Glad you like the use of senses! I really wanted to see what it would be like to write an 'atmosphere' that could be easy to feel, and glad you thought so on the foreshadowing too! I just didn't want to give too much away hahaha. Also damn! I didn't know that Lorikeets weren't all around the world? They're LOUD man like really beautiful to look at but good lord they can be so obnoxious hahaha. Side eye the animals always! Who knows what they're up to...🤨

ThisIsHowIFight

!Spoilers for anyone who hasn't read yet Nice little read! I like how you used the senses to hint at the latter reveal without giving away too much. You fit in a suprising amount of foreshadowing for a short story lmao. Also, a nice little misdirect with the pneumonia 👍 I did have to google what a Lorikeet was though cause that confused me. I thought it was a pets name or something so I thought I skipped a paragraph and missed important info hahahaha I will be side-eyeing my cats every time they yell at me now though