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Story 10: Chapter 6: Life and Death

🕑 Added 2024-06-17 22:12:40 +0000 UTC

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Lotarc

TFTC

Alex I

Am I the only one who is bothered by so many links but not links in these chapters? Cross, can you just put a space after you use multiple dots? Because every time you do that you don't put a space and there are 'links' all over every chapter.

Savagesmiley

Can the dog Gin get the human fruit?

Zero1zero1

TFTC!

Jake V

Hmm, Pika Pika no Mi vs Goro Goro no Mi, on the one hand lightspeed movement + 95% of supernatural creatures being weak to light make it pretty appealing... on the other hand it is kinda a one trick pony. In contrast Goro Goro no Mi + Seiryu's control over clouds means he could probably pull the same shit that Eniel was doing with his ship, just spam giant orbs of country destroying death, and that on top of the Observation Haki bonuses, lightning speed teleportation, flight, moving through conducting surfaces, flash smelting shit with heat at will.... Yeah, Goro Goro no Mi is probably the better choice. Anyways, thanks for the chapter :)

Lotus92

well that combination of devil fruits will give insane endgame scaling when he gets around to master and awaken each of them. But that will take quite some time, will be worth tho.

DJOK DJOK

Thanks for the update love this story

MerlinO

Muchas gracias por el capítulo y muy buena la idea de evitar que los altos mandos de las facciones estén viendo su manga, eso sucede mucho en los Fanfics chinos y la verdad no hay forma de que te lo creas.

Shivrah

Damn it cross now I have to go rewatch My Bride is a Mermaid it's been a decade or so. Thanks for the work.

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the chapter! Nice addition of Sun, from "My Bride is a Mermaid"! Guess there is going to be a fun and lovely surprise waiting for our MC, when he goes to have his spar with Nurarihyon! Can't wait to see it! ... ... ... Oh! I almost forgot! But I also love that our MC can and is helping others - right now only Tobi - getting stronger! I really hope that he will also give others power-ups, like in this chapter, with our MC giving Tobi the Uzumaki bloodline! Can't wait to read more of this great story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Osiris Sundavr

Shuri hasn’t died yet

Osiris Sundavr

Poor Tatsuya, kid just can’t catch a break from everyone important to him dying. Hopefully Shuri doesn’t die in this time line. He would probably lose it and still not really gain anything.

Ototsu_Yume

Shame about the restrictions due to the mundane world, Nika Nika + Phoenix + Mera Mera could have synergised into something absolutely ridiculous; MC also already has the white hair and golden eyes to blend in with the awakening of Nika Nika too. (Sun God + Phoenix + Living Fire) Granted Azure Dragon gives full control over the weather and flies without the need for using the wings or magic too which is just incredibly convenient alongside the rumble fruit for super powered weather assisted lightning, all he's lacking now is a good space manipulation ability and he'd be pretty set; maybe the Gura Gura can cause spacequakes for breaking or folding space xianxia style though?

Orchamus

Eagerly awaiting reactions to his first use of the Gura Gura no Mi😄

crashdash

Good chapter really captured the emotion in each scene. Curious as to what Manga Kiba becomes a fan of.

Jesse

Wow my bride is a mermaid haven’t read a fanfic with them before

Son-Of-Scorn

Love the update, I’ve been waiting for this one, however I still don’t think he should get a third/fourth (?) identity, just makes things needlessly complicated

Savagesmiley

Great chapter, will there be any consideration to give other characters devil fruits? Also if he gets points for people reading his stories can't he just creat a website and post the extra stories online?

mohamed musi

I loved his reaction to Shuri and her "preferences" 😂

savitar

Death is a part of life, although it is sad to see my beloved grandmother die, I think it is something that was going to happen. And I don't want to imagine the reaction he will have when he finds out about Shuri's death at the hands of the members of the Himejima clan.


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