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Chapter 187: To Those Who Are Gone

🕑 Added 2024-02-14 02:12:35 +0000 UTC
Chapter 187: To Those Who Are Gone

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PriÀm

Old age. That was the deal: she gives up her life in Elysium to end up with her new family. She had a happy life and a sweet ending :) Perhaps I should rename the melody Requiem for a Life? It was a reference to the movie "Requiem for a dream" where people escape reality

Baconwargod

It was confirmed in this chapter her soul was no longer connected to her body when she was brought out. She failed.

Gabriel

It’s fine, I guess I got too hooked up on the whole requiem for a dream thing and interpreted it wrongly. Because of that bad interpretation myrcella’s death in this chapter felt out of left field even though it really shouldn’t have. The chapter was good besides that one little detail but that’s more on me than on you. Also, since you said the tribulation gave her dream family souls and also that the tribulation erased her soul once she failed to overcome it, does that mean that she died of old age inside the dream or was she just suddenly killed when it became 100% certain she wouldn’t overcome the tribulation?

PriÀm

My bad, corrected!

PriÀm

Hey Gabriel! I don't quite understand. At the end of chap 184, Mirscella has spent almost sixty years in a 'dream' created by the Tribulation. In this alternate reality, she has everything she ever dreamed of, everything life had denied her. She loves her new life and her family, and is convinced that these people are real (by the way, they are; her second Tribulation gives them a soul). She chooses to stay, to live an ordinary life, rather than return to Elysium to fight. At the end of her Tribulation, she dies spiritually. Requium for a Dream is the melody she creates as she says goodbye to her old life. A Dream, because for her, dream and reality have merged. In any case, she died from her Tribulation, so I don't see why she should come back?

Gabriel

I dont think she actually gave up. A requiem is a composition for the dearly departed and the last thing we see her think about is a composition called “Requiem for a dream” which would mean putting her tribulation dream to rest.

Gabriel

Myrcella’s death honestly feels at odds with her last pov chapter, almost to the point where I’m expecting he “requiem for a dream” to be such a miracle that even the guardian couldn’t see through it. Something like being a funeral song for her tribulation dream that will kill both the dream itself and the necro envoy possessing her at the same time. Anything less than a reversal would feel both anticlimactic and unfitting with the general trend of the story.

Jonas

Thanks for the great chapter

edgardo rossi

Thanks

Jared

For a world like this one it almost feels like Mirscella got the best possible outcome. She got to live a full happy life free of conflict and died peacefully. How many in this world could say the same?

Andrew

Thank you!

Timy Binker

Thanks for the chapter! Interested to see how far Louis will go for Mirscella

omri tal

The reload time for the his next charge of he who eludes death is the same as last chapter

Pievalley

I agree dragonball type resurrection is basically free thus boring but this clearly isn’t anywhere close to free

Pievalley

Dang… not gonna lie kinda sounds like a you problem “if any character can be brought back to life if someone merely completes a practically impossible task at the price of thousands of lives including their own death means nothing” you’re sounding ridiculous

So what if Anatole did all that? We as readers have no emotional connection to the people he sacrificed, and if everyone we do have a connection to can resurrect the stakes quickly become pointless. The outcome to death will quickly turn into us readers just waiting for that person to be resurrected

_mori

Anyone can be resurrected, doesn’t mean it’ll be easy to do so. If the approach to resurrection is always: “you’ll have to pay a price that is thousands of times greater than the worth of your loved one”, I don’t think it’ll dull the story. Look at Anatole and Rose. Dude killed thousands only to end up getting himself killed to resurrect a daughter he couldn’t be with. And he was capable. Louis may not be so. Who knows what he’ll be asked for? Regardless, I think he’ll die trying, though just like Anatole, he’d probably also settle for success at the cost of his own life. I get the feeling that these types of quests will exemplify the saying “the road to hell is paced with good intentions”

PriÀm

Don't worry. I'm of the opinion that a story should follow the characters, not lead them. Mirscella is dead and it's only natural that Louis should want to bring her back to life. As to whether he'll succeed... Only he can prove his resolve. Or die trying. What's certain is that the characters can die, and if they do, it's virtually impossible for them to come back to life. The Universe allows it, so I'm talking about it, but that doesn't mean it'll happen.

_mori

I almost hope Louis will give up on his quest. If he learns why Mirsecella failed her tribulation, that she chose a dream, he might come to resent her, especially if she’s resurrected and still hoping to go back to the dream. It’d be one thing if she failed against a monster. It’s another that she consciously chose to fail.

PriÀm

https://discord.gg/HQDDnwpFmS

John Isaac Mahaffey

She chose the peaceful illusion-life of the tribulation over her real life of conflict. But that isn't the same as choosing to die, or not liking her life on Elysium. I think she'd agree to being resurrected (assuming the concepts ask her opinion...).

I feel like the value of death gets taken away if just about anyone can be resurrected. I hope you keep the importance of death in this story because the story can quickly become dull and boring and it can also point out how unique and strong Priam’s talent truly is

James Faulkner

Welp Myrcella is done and Louis will probably die trying to rez her. Im glad you killed her because too many stories lack stakes, and I’m definitely looking forward to Priam’s next upgrade!

Derze

Can’t say I’m disappointed. Ngl I hope it serves as a necessary fuel but she stays dead. People need to learn that not all paths lead to greatness. Some fall short. Sad that she died. She was an interesting character. But it’s also an opportunity to reflect upon why we all want them alive. She made her choice. It’s time they make theirs.

Baconwargod

I liked it I feel like Louie is setting himself up for heart break in the future. It’s possible she doesn’t want to be resurrected after all. I liked the fact that you did actually kill her though too many stories lack the resolve to actually establish stakes. Looking forward to the training montage

edgardo rossi

Thanks for the chapter. I was wondering where the link to the discord server was.


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