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Chapter 358: A History Lesson

🕑 Added 2025-04-19 07:57:06 +0000 UTC
Chapter 358: A History Lesson

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Geekdumb

Opening paragraph about it being the second chapter has copy and pasting errors. Laughed out loud at Jasmine's comment. She got him good there

D. Kaipo Kailiawa

Yo Auth! U just drop a nuke like that outta the blue and walk away with no acknowledgement even in the next few chapters. BRO THATS JUST INHUMANE! This is story-altering, change in behaviors for many important characters including MC and all we get is Priam stumbles!?!?!? I keep thinking about plausible explanations on why an author would do this and the only one that comes to mind is that you're 12 yrs old or autistic and just don't understand how life-changing this is. It fits as there's lots of missed opportunities throughout the story to enrich with subtle interaction between characters. I really hope you see this and fix it, honestly the easiest way would be to delete it. My personal opinion is the story is not ready for babies or even pregnant championships, there's so many issues to address properly that it would significantly detract from the main premis of the story. Mc is not ready to be a daddy, heck he's not ready to be in a relationship and im surprised he was even able to impregnate Jessica with how awkward he acts around her even after the deed! That kind of behavior indicates confidence issues which has a direct and significant affect on the mechanics of sex especially with a new partner, after a significant lack of sex and/or if one of the participants is a virgin. What would be more believable if you really want to continue down this path is that MC draconian bloodline recognizes when Jessica is impregnated and very strongly urges him to claim her as his which will forever affect all interactions thereafter especially with other males like Rohan and Osiris. That would mean that you rewrite a bunch of chapters . Another way to handle this would be to add some comments that Jessica was just joking and wanted to see Priams reaction. I'm really liking the story thus far and thus the reason im taking the time to write this response, on a mobile phone no less! Please save all of us some grief and DONT A-BOMB THE STORY!!! I'm really surprised there weren't more reactions to this!

MaxWyght

“I hope so,” Jasmine chimed in from behind them. She had a hand on her stomach. “I’m already two months along…” Wait, what?!

PriÀm

Fixed, thanks Zaim!

PriÀm

Yeah, Moonie is the final boss and... Oops, fixed!

Zaim İpek

It's nice to finally get a glimpse at the Judge and his group.

Zaim İpek

"artificial creator" should be "artificial creation"

Jason Hardman

TYFTC! Not sure if this is a typo or mistranslation, but it changes the meaning of the sentence in what I assume is an unintended way: As the artificial creator of the System, the Holy Guardian would emerge from her cocoon as a proper Tier 1. -> As an artificial creation of the System,...

Andrew

Thank you!

MomoDG

She is the Zoan Champion. Seth called her Shapeshifter early on, we learned slightly more when Eve was rescued

Custus

Thanks for the chapter!

Dungeonborn

Sooo Kaya is a Champion or…? And if so who are her people?

Prem Chanumalla

Another use of a the concept shards is cool I wonder what it could be


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