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Chapter 359: Scorching Swarm

🕑 Added 2025-04-23 07:47:36 +0000 UTC
Chapter 359: Scorching Swarm

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Geekdumb

No follow up from the pregnancy comment at all?! Come on! I can totally see Rose getting flustered and Osiris having a panic attack. Jasmine can make comments about her being inside Priam (shadow) and Priam saying it didn't work that way. Blueberry could congratulate him on finally mating. And Louis could offer to throw the baby shower. Kazuki could make a comment about strong offspring and offer to get baby's first spear. It's a hilarious scene that practically writes itself. In all seriousness, while I do think the reactions would be amazing, if you don't want to do them now I don't think you can just gloss over it. Maybe have an initial sputter/response and Kazuki come back to interrupt but you'll have to add some urgency to that to override everything else. Right now it's an abrupt shift and the lack of reaction doesn't make sense without an immediate emergency. Mundane senses, irrelevant now. Blocking out these physical stimuli with Micro, Priam continued his descent. I think this is one paragraph not two. A white letter on a black background standds(stood) out as sharply as black on white. Also, the second part seems unnecessary? White on black stands out as sharply as black on white? I think that goes without saying but maybe I'm not understanding something. Fatigue led to mistakes, and mistakes led to death(s)

Derze

Two ideals + high Aether manipulation

PriÀm

can't post a pic, but very. With curly hair

Prem Chanumalla

pyro + high aether manip can replicate the force of a mythic skill. Interesting

Andrew

Thank you!

Bendeutsch

How hairy are is ancestors balls?

Custus

Thanks for the chapter!


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