Hostess X Spinny Page 6
🕑 Added 2018-09-01 15:43:31 +0000 UTC Almost done with this chapter! We'll be e-mailing it out in a few weeks!
Comments
Mongoose Van Donkereschrijver
I think he was trying to clarify things for Ambientx7
Andre Leitao
This part I understood, my suggestion was for an "What if" version, which would provide us with an interesting variety, without becoming unlikely, after all, when Heather was watching anime to understand MechaMaid she started fantasizing about a " Boy-Marilyn ", and she thinks he was cute!
lordoffiling
All the other nsfw chapters have been canon. This is the only “what if” chapter so far.
Andre Leitao
I believe you could do both, this chapter with Hostess proves this, and it's interesting, if it does not affect your emotional or offensive, see an exchange of partners, look, I love the couple MM X Spinny, I think two perfect, but there are times when it would be interesting to see Heather in a straight relationship, and I think it's not just me who thinks so, I understand that you are the creator, and as such has certain restrictions, if not offended, think about what I'm saying. Who knows a male version of MM? You already used it, and it was a great idea!
Ambientx7
but i thought the nsfw is canon. so spinny and mm never had their first time?
Krazy Krow
Thanks! I’ve been debating whether to do more what-if nsfw chapters, or keep it all canon.
Andre Leitao
Krow, my friend, I know this issue is taking a lot of time you, but for us, fans, is great! If you want to do more like that, I´m in!
Andre Leitao
"butter your biscuits"? This is so fucking hot!!!!
Kevin Wright
On the third panel, I think the word balloon should be split and the first two "sections" pointed at Spinny, maybe?
Azieru
Wow. This is progressing well.
Krazy Krow
You won't be let down ;)
Cahn Siumartinez
Heather pulled a How It Should Have Ended Batman. "You wanna know my secret identity?"
Jason Moon
Dayum!
Ambientx7
absolute wow!! i get that this is all in her head. but i really hope these two happen in the main story. theres too much potential here. im really hoping Sara says something about Heather's abs and muscles in this chapter